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Will Will it consist we arrive of gates of pearl with loud blast and gold-paved streets, of trumpet fanfare, or forests or tiptoe in lush, and silently, as crystalline the waking streams? of dreams? Will Will we look we recall like heavenly all the memories beings imagined by we formed on earth artists: with wings, white or only the robes, gold idyllic ones harps, and or will they cherub face? be erased? Will Will we be there be young, wise food to taste, strong, beautiful, sunsets to watch, tall, short, dark, pale, oceans to paddle in, or simply or will we invisible, enjoy only spiritual brand new beings? pleasures? Will Will we meet we be history's saints able to walk and ask them all our and talk with God many, various questions, as we would a friend? What did He Or will we look like? reverently Was His a bow in awe kind face? of a King? Will Will there be there be any yesterday, no tears, thirst, today or tomorrow, mourning, pain, war, 5 minutes from now, or death, night, or hunger? a week from next Tuesday, Will I have faith to believe? or will time I don't know as we know the answers it be made to all these obsolete? questions... But I have heard of One who knows - to heaven's glorious throne he rose. May I dwell there in unstained clothes in the house of the Lord forever. "Surely goodness and mercy will follow me all the days of my life, and I will dwell in the house of the Lord forever" (Psalm 23:6)

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Date: 6/6/2020 1:09:00 PM
You portray a lot of interesting scenarios, John--lately I've started to wonder if it will be like a most fantastic dream [it's antithesis will surely be the worst imaginable nightmare]. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 6/6/2020 3:43:00 PM
Thank you, L.J. I find there to be a lot of wondering in my mind about the great mystery of heaven. Appreciate the comment and congrats ~ John
Date: 6/4/2020 4:02:00 AM
Always knew this would make it on top. Back to congratulate you on your splendid win my friend :)
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Date: 6/6/2020 3:17:00 AM
Thanks for the 2nd visit and the warm congrats, my friend ~ John
Date: 6/2/2020 10:11:00 PM
Congratulations dear friend! Love the repetitive phrase at the beinning of each stanza (of course!) Wonderful words to ponder with a great conclusion. The shaping of each verse is really just brilliant! Well desered win!
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Date: 6/6/2020 3:16:00 AM
Thanks for the great comment, my friend, and for always noticing even the little things. Blessings, John
Date: 6/2/2020 7:43:00 PM
This is spectacular John it is incredibly beautiful. I hope you may also be able to enter it in the contest about scriptures.This is spectacular John and it is incredibly beautiful! I hope you may also be able to enter it in the contest about Scriptures. The way you have formed your words into arrows is so artistic to lead to the stairway to heaven. This is very deserving of your First Place win! Congratulations! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 6/2/2020 10:02:00 PM
Thanks for the effusive and heartwarming words, my aloha friend! I have written another poem for the Scripture contest, but thanks for the encouraging idea. Blessings to you.
Date: 6/2/2020 7:29:00 PM
This was incredible and the first one I chose for first place in the contest. It's a amazing piece of poetry. I love it. God bless you with many more wonderful words of art... Congrats on placing so highly... much love and blessings sent your way, Gina
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Date: 6/2/2020 9:43:00 PM
So grateful for your sponsoring this contest, Gina! Thanks for the lovely placement and the kind words. Be blessed, John
Date: 5/31/2020 8:23:00 AM
Truly a lovely write...giving the reader a chance to ponder our existence and what may be of it...or the expectations of it...
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Date: 5/31/2020 1:23:00 PM
You have captured my intentions well, Arturo. Readers pondering. Thank you for the kind visits and encouragement today. ~ John
Date: 5/30/2020 2:59:00 PM
Your idea here was BRILLIANT. Oh my Gosh, this should get FIRST place!! How I wish I had thought this up. I need to work on this one really fast!! When I get home, I am hitting the deck to try it out! See ya later, tiny tator.
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Date: 5/30/2020 4:42:00 PM
Andrea, your enthusiastic responses always mean so much to me. I think the ultimate compliment is to hear that another poet whom you greatly admire wishes they had thought of your idea. Thank you, and I hope you are happy with your poem about heaven; I'm sure I will be ~ John
Date: 5/30/2020 12:54:00 PM
Each symbol deals with a different mood. You have created a brilliant layout while raising questions with poignant use of metaphors like paddling in the ocean and gates of pearls. This is definitely a winner with such an outstanding effort. Blessings my dear friend and best wishes for the contest :)
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Date: 5/30/2020 4:39:00 PM
Aditi, I am glad you were able to see the different moods presented in each vignette. These are all questions I have asked or have heard others ask about this of which so little is understood. I think most religious thinkers believe that having hope in a paradise after life is a very important aspect of faith. Thank you for your kind comments and best wishes. Blessings to you, my friend ~ John
Date: 5/29/2020 9:00:00 AM
So brilliantly composed, John, a sure winner in my eyes:) We sure know that heaven is a wonderful place 'coz we will be with our Saviour forever:)
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Date: 5/29/2020 10:50:00 AM
Amen to that, Jo. Thank you for the visit and kind words. I hope you will be entering the heaven contest, I'd love to read what you have to say about such a glorious subject. Hope you are having a wonderful day!
Date: 5/28/2020 4:06:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this one. We do have more questions than answers but we know if He is there we will be in a wonderful place prepared for us. I believe it will be beautiful, comfortable and just perfect for the human heavenly race. Sara
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Date: 5/28/2020 5:25:00 PM
Thank you for reading this, dear Sara, and for leaving such a lovely comment. I believe it will be far beyond what we can even imagine. Blessings ~ John
Date: 5/28/2020 12:50:00 PM
I believe we will pleasantly surprised when we arrive John It will surpass all our expectations. Love the creative layout. Good luck in the contest Tom
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Date: 5/28/2020 2:20:00 PM
Thank you, sir. I agree with you, there will be surprises aplenty. Be blessed today, Tom ~ John
Date: 5/28/2020 6:51:00 AM
This is beautifully written, John. A masterpiece. I enjoyed this creative poem. Have a nice day :)
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Date: 5/28/2020 3:10:00 PM
Thank you for coming by, Heidi! I appreciate your high praise and so glad you enjoyed it. Hope your recovery has gone well and you are close to fully healed, if not there already! Be blessed ~ John

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