In the Heat of the Battle

Spare me the goof,
O dear Captain,
Hear the rattling mess tins,
My dear old kit bag,
Worn out in action,
I lost my hold-all,
The spare drawers’ cotton,
A half-full water bottle,
Almost emptying my Haversack lunch,
The sun is scorching,
The camouflage is withering,
The cover is blowing out,
Silhouetted we crawl, 
The impetus is gathering, hell no,
The attack is uphill, so soon,
O dear Captain,
Silver-tongued Captain,
Think so fast, so fast like never before.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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October 30, 2013 at 1:14 PM
Hassan . Love the win *Hugs* SKAT..
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October 29, 2013 at 8:58 PM
Hassan, , well done, congratulations in the Let's be Open contest... always~ LINDA
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June 14, 2013 at 11:14 PM
I like the Silver tongue Captain image... love it..... SKAT
Haji Avatar
June 21, 2013 at 3:26 PM
Thats what drives the passion, thanks SKAT
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June 14, 2013 at 8:27 PM
This is a stimulating ode. I liike it! Welcome to the soup! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
Haji Avatar
June 21, 2013 at 3:24 PM
Thanks Matthews
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