Vladislav Raven Poet Rhyme

In the Heart of a Moonlit Smile - a Collaboration With Connie

In the heart of a moonlit smile,
as the sky is alight with fire,
I behold a woman of style,
in sunset she shines with desire.
a love-light glow upon her face, 
her temple shining so divine,
I hold close, her Heavenly grace,
with angelic love, she does shine.

A man of great integrity
whose fondness for the twilight hour,
is shared with me in unity
in grandeur of nature's power.
The stars reflected in his eyes
enchants my soul upon this night,
we gaze in love, with moonlit skies
as crickets serenade 'til light.

As always, Connie, it is an honour to share words with you on the Soup. you always make our collaborations sing. Stay safe.

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Pandita Sietesantos August 4, 2020 at 8:22 AM My friend, this beautifully written piece, created in collaboration with Connie, is extraordinarily exquisite! I'm enthralled as I can feel the romance of souls and the love emanating from within the steady fires burning in the hearts of these lovers! A romantic masterpiece indeed! Congratulations to you and Connie! Best regards. Pandita Vladislav Raven August 5, 2020 at 8:13 AM Hi Pandita, thank you for dropping by and the comment on our collaboration, it is much appreciated. We are so glad you liked the piece. It is always an honour and a pleasure to collaborate with Connie. She always makes things so easy, just like yourself. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Love and Hugs always....Mike. XX

Paghunda Zahid June 26, 2020 at 8:51 PM What a creative poem. Beautiful Imagery. Sty blessed Vladislav Raven August 5, 2020 at 7:45 AM Hi Paghunda, thank you for dropping by and the like on our collaboration, it is much appreciated. We are so glad you liked the piece. I aoways enjoy doing these collaborations, Connie makes it so easy to do them. Have a wonderful Wednesday....Mike.

John Hamilton May 17, 2020 at 9:41 AM What a beautiful collaboration you two have made, a truly romantic delight. I love any write that includes the moon and the stars, well done Mike and Connie, when you two dip the quill together it's always a great read! Vladislav Raven August 5, 2020 at 7:28 AM Hi John, thank you for dropping by and the comment on our collaboration, it is much appreciated. We are so glad you liked our piece. We are with you when it comes to the moon and stars. It is always an honour to collaborate with Connie. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Your friend always....Mike.

Funom Makama April 30, 2020 at 1:54 AM Creativity at its best, passion digging deepest. Your voice is powerful here. What an excellent piece. Vladislav Raven May 2, 2020 at 7:08 AM Hi Funom, thank you for dropping by and the comment on our collaboration, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. It is always an honour and a pleasure to collaborate with Connie. Connie gives our collaboration's heart. Have a wonderful Saturday. Your friend....Mike.

Mark Koplin April 18, 2020 at 5:12 PM Well done you two. Great work! Vladislav Raven April 19, 2020 at 5:46 AM Hi Mark, thank you for dropping by and the comment on our collaboration, it is much appreciated. We are so glad you liked the piece. It is always an honour and a pleasure to write in collaboration with Connie. Connie always gives our collaborations heart. Have a wonderful Sunday. Your friend....Mike.

Jennifer Proxenos April 18, 2020 at 2:52 PM Outstanding poetry, congratulations to you both - an amazing poetess and a romantic poet produced a gem. Blessings Mike and stay safe. Jennifer. Vladislav Raven April 19, 2020 at 5:35 AM Hi Jennifer, thank you for dropping by and the comment on our collaboration, it is much appreciated. It is always an honour and a pleasure to collaborate with Connie. Connie gives the work its heart. Have a wonderful Sunday. Hugs....Mike. XX Connie Marcum Wong April 18, 2020 at 11:48 PM Thank you very much Jennifer. Mike's poetry inspires and it was lovely to collaborate with him. I am happy you enjoyed this. xxoo

Mystic Rose Rose April 17, 2020 at 10:05 PM Very nicely done, I am glad I chose this poem to read this evening. Thank you Vladislav Raven April 18, 2020 at 8:34 AM Hi Vienna, thank you for dropping by and the comment on our collaboration, it is much appreciated. We are so glad you liked the piece. It is always an honour and a pleasure to work with Connie on a collaboration. Connie gives the work its soul. Have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Richard Lamoureux April 17, 2020 at 8:27 AM What a treat, two of my favourite poets singing in perfect harmony. Hugs to both. Connie Marcum Wong April 18, 2020 at 11:47 PM Thank you very much Richard. It is a pleasure to collaborate with Mike as his work inspires me. I don't collaborate often but I really enjoyed his words about romance and nature as the stars of this piece. xxoo Vladislav Raven April 18, 2020 at 8:27 AM Hi Richard, thank you for dropping by and the comment on our new collaboration, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked our piece. It is always an honour and a pleasure to collaborate with Connie. Connie gives the write its soul. Have a wonderful Saturday. Blessings....Mike.

Eileen Manassian April 17, 2020 at 8:08 AM Wow! What an amazing write. I liked how the voice changes from his to hers, yet one feels the unity of romantic feelings. Vladislav Raven April 18, 2020 at 8:17 AM Hi Eileen, thank you for dropping by and the comment on our collaboration, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. It is always a pleasure and an honour to collaborate with Connie. It is always so easy. Have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs....Mike. XX