In the Graveyard of Soldiers

On sunny summer mornings
the myriad markers gleam 
and shimmer dreamlike
in the distance.
Visions from the stillness rise,
but only of the past,
for in this place,
time has come
to sudden end.

Glimpsed on headstone faces
in plain and shallow font
are etchings of their names.
Forefingers trace the course
of letters and summon memories,
suddenly vivid, of the fallen—
perhaps the only form 
of resurrection most alive
will ever know.

A place of buried treasure this—
of ones revered and honored
who would unlock secrets of the mind,
give us cures for all disease that
we might live a thousand years
and summon knowledge beyond imagining.
Yet we have robbed ourselves of such,
for all these gifts lie with them interred;
their honors go unclaimed.

On headstones too are symbols carved,
emblematic of their faiths, for
we would have our deities
compete for attribution
until the soils of all the world
run red in honor of Their names.
Yet in the end our Gods are
much too small, dwarfed by 
mankind’s boundless vanity.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 7/4/2021 12:27:00 PM
You bring them all great honor Mark, great work. One of my favorite subjects...
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Date: 1/24/2017 3:50:00 PM
This poem is beyond beautiful Mark! It penetrates the soul. Your words so eloquently express the great loss from war, the contributions that will never be realized from these fallen souls. The waste and sorrow for these treasures. Brilliantly penned my friend and a fave from me too! 7 ; )
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Mark Peterson
Date: 6/9/2018 11:59:00 PM
Thanks, Connie. I think of you often but don't write too much these days, as a consequence of multiple injuries I've suffered. Perhaps, when the can determine how to repair the damage, I can write again.
Date: 5/6/2016 7:59:00 PM
OMG, this is AMAZING, Mark. It's incredible and maybe one of your very best poems. NOt only for craftsmanship but for the profound message it imparts. FAVE
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Mark Peterson
Date: 5/9/2016 7:22:00 AM
So grateful for your praise of my work. What a treasured asset you are of the Soup.
Date: 3/18/2016 9:28:00 PM
Much darker and more somber than I was expecting ... but I like it. Typically saying the word "hero" and "freedom" doesn't do justice to it all ... they were once walking, living human beings, with hopes and dreams like everyone ... not two-dimensional figures. I like how you see that. "we would have our deities compete for attribution until the soils of all the world run in honor of Their names." Wow. Powerful lines. It really rubs me the wrong way, when people become statistics.
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Date: 3/20/2016 7:10:00 PM
Here is something I once read: "War is the last refuge of failure." I hope someday we won't have to throw the entire might of the world at a single individual. Someone, perhaps Sir Arthur C. Clarke mused that despots would be neutralized by a single, 1,000 Hz. note playing in their ear twenty-four hours a day, requiring very little power. Thanks for reading this poem Timothy. I really enjoy your remarks.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/18/2016 9:30:00 PM
... when two groups are separated into "bad guys" and "good guys" ... in war it's always a mix of both. Nationalistic fervor, and misplaced ideas of godliness, can put the world in a whole mess of trouble. We would do well to think before we act.
Date: 3/18/2016 2:13:00 PM
very poignant Mark great imagery my friend :-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/18/2016 7:13:00 PM
Thank you, Jan, for stopping to read this. You're such a lovely friend.
Date: 3/17/2016 9:12:00 PM
A poignant write Mark...well penned...
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Date: 3/18/2016 2:12:00 AM
Thanks, Joseph. Gosh, it's been a long time since I've seen your name on my pages. I was away for quite some time—waiting for my muse to return from vacation.
Date: 3/13/2016 4:51:00 PM
love this deep, deep write
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Date: 3/15/2016 12:52:00 PM
Jack, I appreciate your coming to my page to read this poem. It's been far too long, my friend, since I've read yours, so watch out!
Date: 3/13/2016 1:39:00 PM
i enjoyed the ritualistic nature of this piece, mark... really good one!,,huggs
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Date: 3/15/2016 12:54:00 PM
It always make me so happy to see your Avatar on any of my poems' pages. I appreciate your comments and devotion to my work, which has been unfailing.
Date: 3/13/2016 1:30:00 PM
I am not a big fan of free verse poetry, Robert...But this is all rather good! Nicely penned. My best regards! :) john
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Date: 3/15/2016 1:00:00 PM
Gosh, John, such a wonderful compliment. I am honored. And very nice to meet you. I'll spend some time on your page next.
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