In the Gloaming

In the absence of moonlight          Beyond midnight        Making love      In the gloaming      For an eternity         Hopefully Heaven
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dietrich Avatar
November 14, 2013 at 11:20 PM
You are a rule breaker, Richard! So gloaming will be for you what you want it to be, but I put too much weight to words and I love precision. However, once in a while I love breaking rules too!!!
Ferry Avatar
November 14, 2013 at 11:53 PM
Glad to hear that!
Dietrich Avatar
August 16, 2013 at 10:20 PM
this is very pretty. Soupmail for ya.
Ferry Avatar
November 14, 2013 at 10:11 PM
Heh, Champ..Just read your soupmail...Do me a favor read my poem again..The gloaming is always beyond midnight for an eternity. Everything Andrea, is beyond midnight for an eternity. Is it not?
Duncan Avatar
July 29, 2013 at 4:05 PM
good luck ;}
Ferry Avatar
August 2, 2013 at 1:34 PM
Thanks Debbie.....
May Avatar
July 27, 2013 at 5:31 AM
best wishes in the contest
Ferry Avatar
July 27, 2013 at 4:21 PM
thanks
Roberts Avatar
July 27, 2013 at 1:51 AM
Good luck for the contest Richard ...Seren
Ferry Avatar
July 27, 2013 at 4:22 PM
thanks Seren
Gorelick Avatar
July 26, 2013 at 9:45 PM
Looks like we both like the idea of "gloaming"...enjoyed your poem. BG
Ferry Avatar
July 26, 2013 at 11:30 PM
What`s not to like
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