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In the Garden of Eden, I Am the Kitten

UNSUPPORTED CODE In the garden of Eden There is no sorrow and cries I am the pretty kitten Playing with blue butterflies There is no sorrow and cries Here, Love blooms in every ground Playing with blue butterflies Only caress can be found Here, Love blooms in every ground Butterflies flutter and play Only caress can be found I sleep on the grass or hay Butterflies flutter and play My paws do not hurt any I sleep on the grass or hay I like to play with many My paws do not hurt any I am the pretty kitten I like to play with many In the garden of Eden 09.03.16 7 syllables per line

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Susan Gentry

Date: 3/22/2016 12:53:00 AM

Congratulations on your win! Enjoyed this!

Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 3/24/2016 8:41:00 AM

XOX, Bobby

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/20/2016 11:53:00 PM

Hi Bobby, sweet win. Congrats on your Kitten & Butterflies write. LINDA

Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 3/24/2016 8:41:00 AM

XOXO, Bobby

Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/20/2016 10:03:00 PM

This has such a nice rhythm, Anindya, with perfect rhyme. I like how you took us to the garden of Eden, where no paws hurt anyone. Very innocent. Congrats on the win!

Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 3/20/2016 11:36:00 PM

Thanks a lot, Tim, for your visit and compliments. Hugs, Bobby

Meenakshi Raina

Date: 3/20/2016 7:23:00 PM

Congratulations on your first place....well done!

Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 3/20/2016 11:35:00 PM

Thanks a lot for your visit and wishes. Greetings, Bobby

Anisha Dutta

Date: 3/20/2016 12:24:00 AM

Anindya congrats to win on wonderful poem with a real poetic touch. Best Wishes . Anisha D

Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 3/20/2016 8:33:00 AM

Didi! bless me so that I can go ahead with my passion. My profession hardly support writing poetry and this time I am not going to quit writing. Your words encourage me, greatly. Thank you. Hugs, Bobby

James Inman

Date: 3/19/2016 9:41:00 PM

Beautifully done Anindya.

Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 3/20/2016 8:29:00 AM

Any word of appreciation from you, is a blessing to me, James. Thanks a lot for your visit and encouraging words. Hugs, Bobby

Vladislav Raven

Date: 3/19/2016 7:31:00 PM

Hi Bobby, Congratulations on your 1st Place win Bobby. I enjoyed the piece my friend. A seven from me....Vlad.

Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 3/20/2016 8:25:00 AM

Thanks a lot, Vlad, for your continuous support and love. 1 is just a lonely number to me, your love is more important, because I want to reside in your hearts, dear. Hugs, Bobby

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/19/2016 5:49:00 PM

Congrats!!!((())) Sara

Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 3/20/2016 8:22:00 AM

Thanks a lot, Sara. Hugs, Bobby

Stephen Pennell

Date: 3/19/2016 5:45:00 PM

well done not easy congrats

Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 3/20/2016 8:21:00 AM

Thank you so very much, Stephen, for your visit and compliments. Hugs, Bobby

Jan Allison

Date: 3/19/2016 4:09:00 PM

lovely imagery Bobby congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 3/20/2016 8:20:00 AM

I am humbled, Jan. Hugs, Bobby

Eve Roper

Date: 3/19/2016 3:41:00 PM

Anindya, thank you for creating a poem for my contest! I LOVED IT :) Hugs Eve

Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 3/20/2016 8:19:00 AM

Thank you so very much, Eve, you made me write a Pantoum. Initially, your project was impossible to me. But, when I got some time to think, I told myself, " Bobby, give it a try". So I have written " You are my Durga" for another website's contest and after completing that one, I have written this poem within a few minutes. Love and hugs, Bobby