Anindya Mohan Tagore Poet Pantoum

In the Garden of Eden, I Am the Kitten

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In the garden of Eden
There is no sorrow and cries
I am the pretty kitten
Playing with blue butterflies

There is no sorrow and cries
Here, Love blooms in every ground
Playing with blue butterflies
Only caress can be found

Here, Love blooms in every ground
Butterflies flutter and play
Only caress can be found
I sleep on the grass or hay

Butterflies flutter and play
My paws do not hurt any
I sleep on the grass or hay
I like to play with many

My paws do not hurt any
I am the pretty kitten
I like to play with many
In the garden of Eden

09.03.16

7 syllables per line

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Susan Gentry March 22, 2016 at 12:53 AM Congratulations on your win! Enjoyed this! Anindya Mohan Tagore March 24, 2016 at 8:41 AM XOX, Bobby

Poet Destroyer A March 20, 2016 at 11:53 PM Hi Bobby, sweet win. Congrats on your Kitten & Butterflies write. LINDA Anindya Mohan Tagore March 24, 2016 at 8:41 AM XOXO, Bobby

Timothy Hicks March 20, 2016 at 10:03 PM This has such a nice rhythm, Anindya, with perfect rhyme. I like how you took us to the garden of Eden, where no paws hurt anyone. Very innocent. Congrats on the win! Anindya Mohan Tagore March 20, 2016 at 11:36 PM Thanks a lot, Tim, for your visit and compliments. Hugs, Bobby

Meenakshi Raina March 20, 2016 at 7:23 PM Congratulations on your first place....well done! Anindya Mohan Tagore March 20, 2016 at 11:35 PM Thanks a lot for your visit and wishes. Greetings, Bobby

Anisha Dutta March 20, 2016 at 12:24 AM Anindya congrats to win on wonderful poem with a real poetic touch. Best Wishes . Anisha D Anindya Mohan Tagore March 20, 2016 at 8:33 AM Didi! bless me so that I can go ahead with my passion. My profession hardly support writing poetry and this time I am not going to quit writing. Your words encourage me, greatly. Thank you. Hugs, Bobby

James Inman March 19, 2016 at 9:41 PM Beautifully done Anindya. Anindya Mohan Tagore March 20, 2016 at 8:29 AM Any word of appreciation from you, is a blessing to me, James. Thanks a lot for your visit and encouraging words. Hugs, Bobby

Vladislav Raven March 19, 2016 at 7:31 PM Hi Bobby, Congratulations on your 1st Place win Bobby. I enjoyed the piece my friend. A seven from me....Vlad. Anindya Mohan Tagore March 20, 2016 at 8:25 AM Thanks a lot, Vlad, for your continuous support and love. 1 is just a lonely number to me, your love is more important, because I want to reside in your hearts, dear. Hugs, Bobby

Sara Kendrick March 19, 2016 at 5:49 PM Congrats!!!((())) Sara Anindya Mohan Tagore March 20, 2016 at 8:22 AM Thanks a lot, Sara. Hugs, Bobby

Stephen Pennell March 19, 2016 at 5:45 PM well done not easy congrats Anindya Mohan Tagore March 20, 2016 at 8:21 AM Thank you so very much, Stephen, for your visit and compliments. Hugs, Bobby

Jan Allison March 19, 2016 at 4:09 PM lovely imagery Bobby congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Anindya Mohan Tagore March 20, 2016 at 8:20 AM I am humbled, Jan. Hugs, Bobby

Eve Roper March 19, 2016 at 3:41 PM Anindya, thank you for creating a poem for my contest! I LOVED IT :) Hugs Eve Anindya Mohan Tagore March 20, 2016 at 8:19 AM Thank you so very much, Eve, you made me write a Pantoum. Initially, your project was impossible to me. But, when I got some time to think, I told myself, " Bobby, give it a try". So I have written " You are my Durga" for another website's contest and after completing that one, I have written this poem within a few minutes. Love and hugs, Bobby

Andrea Dietrich March 11, 2016 at 10:29 PM ahhh, this is so sweet, Anindya. I enjoyed it. Anindya Mohan Tagore March 11, 2016 at 11:11 PM Thanks a lot, Andy. Hugs, Bobby

Constance La France March 11, 2016 at 6:47 PM Bobby, I love your sweet write , 7 ~ Anindya Mohan Tagore March 11, 2016 at 8:24 PM Thank you, Constance. Hugs, Bobby

Nette Onclaud March 9, 2016 at 4:32 AM splendid work, anindya... you made this theme look so easy.. thanks for coming around my page.. huggs Anindya Mohan Tagore March 9, 2016 at 7:49 AM Thanks a lot, nette, for your visit and encouraging words. truly honoured. Hugs back, Bobby

Hija De La Luna March 9, 2016 at 12:21 AM Lovely write! Anindya Mohan Tagore March 9, 2016 at 4:21 AM Thank you, Luna. Hugs, Bobby