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In the Garden


It was a Victorian garden with winding paths,
          With a formal terrace and a conservatory;
   Where exotic plants flourished in the warmth,
And planted urns of wisteria and roses grew wildly.

Chestnut trees with fallen leaves crumbling;
          Benches worn and beckoning to rest a soul;
   The sky was muted and grey without a moon,
It was deeply dark and cool in the garden this night.

The lady was quietly absorbed as she walked,
          Lost in her own world in this gentle atmosphere;
   She wore a mauve gown that revealed pale skin,
And her wrap was of the softest peach chiffon.

A pearl necklace embraced her slender neck,
           And dark flowing hair blew in the cool breeze;
   Her sadness deep, perhaps the death of someone,
Perhaps the death of love yet she was in quiet repose.

He stood watching her for the longest of time,
          There was such a calmness and serenity here;
   A deep love for this lady filled his heart and soul,
And stepping off the terrace he called out her name.

. . .  she ran to him weeping for she had thought him lost . . .


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March 4, 2015

Poetry/Verse/In The Garden
Copyright Protected, ID 03-647-289-04
All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance La France


For the Mid July Standard Contest
Sponsor, Brian Strand

Second Place 
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Submitted to the Premier contest, Pick A Subject
Sponsor, Shadow Hamilton, Judged 04/2015 

Second Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Johnson Avatar
July 16, 2017 at 10:50 AM
Hi Broken Wings. I love the two story and wrap-around porch, a gentle haven and a little of heaven on earth. What a dear poem this is. I deeply felt and enjoyed it. Congrats on your placement. Blessings.
Ryerson Avatar
July 30, 2015 at 3:16 AM
Pale skin, slender neck and dark flowing hair? Sounds like somebody I know...Elegantly written my friend! BIG congrats - Tim-------PS: Have I mentioned yet how good it is to see you back writing and winning contests? (This is probably the 10th time)
Lindley Avatar
July 27, 2015 at 9:36 AM
LOVE THIS IMAGE FEAST. Congrats on a fine win my friend!A7
A. Sharma Avatar
July 27, 2015 at 12:28 AM
Emotive n heartfelt write BW, Congrats on ur awesome win!
Y. Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 11:07 PM
BW, congratulations on your awesome win :-)Alexis
Rodgers Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 9:06 PM
A lovely sense of mood, loss and then return. Congrats on your win.
A  Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 8:33 PM
BROKEN. Congrats on your win. ThanXs for the support. Love SKAT
Makama Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 12:36 PM
This is a well thought piece, showcasing the tender make up of your soul and the immense creativity, so rich in your mind. I so love this and thanks a lot for sharing..
Ebbs Avatar
March 10, 2015 at 10:10 PM
This was captivating...smiles for you :)
Lamoureux Avatar
March 7, 2015 at 10:45 AM
I enjoyed rereading this one Constance. Thanks for commenting on my "Tell Me" poem, it is now finished.
Kimathi Avatar
March 7, 2015 at 8:28 AM
Congratulations for your WIN Broken Wings! ^_^
Lamoureux Avatar
March 6, 2015 at 8:43 AM
Beautiful Constance!
A   Avatar
March 6, 2015 at 2:53 AM
Broken, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~
Allison Avatar
March 5, 2015 at 7:38 AM
Such a lovely take on the theme - brilliant imagery and I love the ending:-) congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
Hamilton Avatar
March 5, 2015 at 6:33 AM
very moving poem Connie loved it congrats on 2nd place hugs
Dietrich Avatar
March 4, 2015 at 6:24 PM
this scene is so cool, Constance, so eloquently described. I loved that she had no expectation of seeing him and suddenly at the end, he appeared!!
Pinet Avatar
March 4, 2015 at 9:30 AM
Your poem falls within the category of fanciful and imaginative; armed with an energy of its own that propels it into our sphere of reality. You are a master story teller and we await breathlessly for your next saga to unfold. Emile. #7
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