In the Fragility of Dreams

Upon the stillness of Big Sur clouds
High atop the silent summits 
My solitude lies with sages
In this place of heaven
Endeared
To come to peace 
In the ruins of the moon

Laying my body to rest
My eyes have turned to stone
Surrendering to freefall
Where there lies no restraint
Nor command of my being
Searching for the graces of timelessness

The flurry of breeze quavers
To take my soul
Plunging towards
An uncertain destination

My silent voice utters
"I have come to pick the lyrical flower
For my heart has yet to find its home."

In between the nettles and phantom orchid,
The coastal grasses and spineflowers
Sunlit and ethereal in the mist
A single rose of an unknown color
Speaks my name
With insatiable seduction
Capturing my unabated love
It fills my senses and enraptures me

Then slowly...
Ever so slowly, each petal of my 
incarnated being
Breaks away from my heart
As the rose aspires
And dies
Left naked adorned with thorns 
In the ruins of the moon
It calls my name
In the fragility of dreams



May 18, 2020
In the Fragility of Dreams Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Silent One

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Date: 5/27/2020 2:36:00 PM
- Dreams can be so much and it's not always easy to understand them - Dreams are the best therapy for us humans ... and dreams can be fulfilled - Congratulations on your winning poem, Lonna :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 5/27/2020 4:39:00 PM
Good to hear from you Anne-Lise! Hope you are well and happy in these trying times. Dreams are a significant part of our journey that's for sure!
Date: 5/27/2020 1:27:00 PM
This is a mystical write. Your words enchant me Lonna. Congratulations on your win :)
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 5/27/2020 1:42:00 PM
Thanks Aditi for your words. Truly appreciate your visits.
Date: 5/27/2020 5:42:00 AM
Beautiful start to your poem, capturing the essence of dreams... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 5/27/2020 1:30:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words!
Date: 5/23/2020 5:31:00 AM
Another beautifull landscape. I have been there as well and it is a magical place; in dreams and reality ...
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 5/24/2020 2:53:00 PM
Really appreciate your visit and sharing. Thank you so much Kai
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