In the Flower of His Youth

IN THE FLOWER OF HIS YOUTH

You are what you eat?
Bill, a young  guy,  friend of mine  -
Teetotaler and keen gardener neat -
Drank nothing but  dandelion wine.

Like Dr Moreau’s Island modus operandi ,  
His grey hair became heir  (or scion )
To  the  fluffball of a dandy :
And Bill started to turn into a dandelion. . . . 

. . . . . at  spreading time of seed !
Still,  Bill said,  it’s  not too bad  -
Better than being herbally  tea’d
Or becoming  part of a salad.

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Written for John Freeman's Contest  "Boisterous Comedy"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Mehta Avatar
August 22, 2011 at 3:48 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of John, Sydney
Brown Avatar
August 22, 2011 at 3:41 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Moses' "Boisterous Comedy" contest Syd. Love, Carol
Lane Avatar
August 22, 2011 at 10:18 AM
Well written and a lot of fun. Tony
Onclaud Avatar
August 22, 2011 at 1:13 AM
there you go with your special brand of humor, KC.. . heaps of cheers for the BIG-TIME win..:) huggs!
Johnson Avatar
August 22, 2011 at 12:39 AM
I really like this one. Congratulations on your winning poem. Joyce
Dufresne Avatar
August 21, 2011 at 9:54 PM
congratulations on your win Sydney
Williams Avatar
August 21, 2011 at 5:15 PM
hey Sydney congrats on your win David
Sweetheart Avatar
August 21, 2011 at 4:26 PM
Congrats Sydney on a great win with this fun filled write ...
Freeman Avatar
August 21, 2011 at 4:16 PM
Haaa! a great job Sydney. Congratulations in the winner circle. Agape, MOses
Richards Avatar
August 17, 2011 at 9:10 PM
Oh you are so clever!!! This is terrific!! (wish I'd thought of it!!) ps...I've always wondered how dandelion wine tastes....now I'm afraid to ever try it!!)
Francis Avatar
August 17, 2011 at 12:22 PM
nice write up
Smith Avatar
August 17, 2011 at 12:16 PM
What a dandy poem; no lyin'. Too funny.
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