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In the Fields

That night in the fields
As the moon hung low
Its light among the darkened grass
The wind blew cool
Playing with the stars as they shone
And there
In the midsts of their twinkles
I saw your face
Your love breaking the night
Shinning brighter than day
I felt peace
In your arms
Among your words
My sanity
As I stood in the wake of your shadow
You stand tall and proud
Of all you done
In this life
Everyone loves you
None more than I do
That night
In the fields
As the moon climbed high
Its pale glow fading slowly
I found my place
And though the stars
Twinkled into the light
As the sun mounted its horizon
I could still see your face
Rolling softly in the clouds
Making it clear
That I will always have a place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006




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Date: 6/8/2024 12:42:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/13/2016 11:17:00 PM
ayishah, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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