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In the End - With Darren White

Walking through cold snow
Thoughts wandering as I go
Dragging my feet ever slowly
Bound for a place I know

The snowflakes make it hard to see
I’m wishing that you were close to me
two sets of footsteps left behind
being alone does not set me free

On our travels, we shall find
Together we make one of a kind
If only I could see the end
For now, you stay on my mind

In our lives we often mend
and break, we need that friend
that holds us when we need
on whom we can depend
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Vaso Avatar
June 21, 2024 at 11:50 PM
Of course this brings tears to my eyes, :(
Salehi Avatar
March 15, 2018 at 2:28 AM
Very nice, great collaboration on a very difficult style of poetry
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 5, 2018 at 12:14 PM
Hello White Wolf, I like this poem you and Darren created. I like the last verse the best. Have a nice day my friend.
Robinson Jr. Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 6:39 AM
Big props to this embraceable poem of deep Atlantis dreamy love, WW and Darren. Plus, you talented two collabed on a very difficult poetic form. Rubiayat ain't an easy one to do ... let alone w/another person. Bravo! This is a sterling snow-bird poem. It takes love to another elevated branch level. Great job on a fantastic piece of poetry. Love and best wishes always.
Smith Avatar
February 16, 2018 at 1:49 PM
Buddy love, sweet thoughts,,,
Stebbings Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 8:51 AM
Great collaboration, WW. Good to see you writing again. // Barry
Reyna Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 1:24 AM
Awesomeness!
Vaso Avatar
February 4, 2018 at 2:08 AM
Knowing the bond, I know this is not beautiful poetry, is deep and great poetry! I only wish more could see this!
Turner Avatar
February 3, 2018 at 11:34 AM
Nicely done, Budgie and Darren. One can feel the longing in the poem. I enjoyed reading you today:)
Gupta Avatar
February 3, 2018 at 12:41 AM
Very well written a poem it is ... though a shadow of unease ... blue memories are very nice ... roses looking from the trees ...
Rodrigues Avatar
February 2, 2018 at 9:44 PM
A sad write! A great collaboration!
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