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In the Dell

securely hidden small secluded valley... morning awakens rainbows of color flowers glisten with fresh dew... animals abound fluffy clouds floating sunshine brings natural prizms... heaven, earth collide

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/14/2013 8:45:00 PM

Carol , Stopping by with sincere thanks for your kind comments. It is appreciated more than words or can say... Wishing you the best Valentine's Day YET! Always & Forever :-) LINDA .

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/11/2013 9:38:00 PM

a nice little win, once again... I'm waiting for your sunshine to bring prism here.....xox~LINDA

Bl Devnath

Date: 11/3/2012 12:20:00 PM

Wonderful poem on Nature is just read now which I missed earlier. Congratulation of the past just made it present, sorry for late. Loved always, bl

Gail Debole

Date: 7/21/2012 7:04:00 PM

Hi Carol - Congratulations! Favorite lines are "rainbows of color," and "heaven, earth collide." Thank you again for your kind words and positive support regarding my poetry. Hope all is well. - Gail

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 7/21/2012 8:52:00 AM

Congrats on your amazing win Carol! I love that last line!! :)) Have a wonderful weekend. Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Terry O'Leary

Date: 7/20/2012 2:14:00 PM

Beautiful set... Congratulations on your win... Terry

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/19/2012 12:38:00 PM

congrats Carol on a wonderful win for this amazing scene painted in lovely words my friend.. most gracious to behold..

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 7/19/2012 11:45:00 AM

I want to be there! congrats on a beautiful piece. BG

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/18/2012 6:41:00 PM

I really like this, Carol! A beautiful, picturesque scene. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/18/2012 5:27:00 PM

Big congrats to you on your well deserved win!

Deborah Burch

Date: 7/18/2012 2:38:00 PM

Big Congrats Carol on your win!!! you described an early morning so well...love ya, deb

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/18/2012 1:38:00 PM

Congrats on your win in the contest..I am sorry that I had missed this one...I enjoyed reading your creative work..Thanks for stopping by with congrats..Sara

Joyce Johnson

Date: 7/18/2012 12:58:00 PM

Nicely done carol. congratulations. Love, Joyce

David Williams

Date: 7/18/2012 10:58:00 AM

Carol congrats on your win. very well portrayed..David

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/18/2012 9:31:00 AM

Thank you first of all to Gail for my placement in this contest. Thank you all who have read, commented, and the congrats. I apprecite this very much. Love, Carol

David Scott

Date: 7/17/2012 12:13:00 PM

lovely atmosphere nice how you capture the element thankyou also for your comments on my poem xx davidscott

Kacey Greenlee

Date: 7/16/2012 4:34:00 PM

Enchanting words from an amazing poet.Wish you all the best.Thank you so much for dropping by and leaving such kind words about my poem...BALANCE....Have a great week and keep on inspiring others.Sincerely,me

Sherese Gooden

Date: 7/14/2012 1:45:00 PM

Soo vivid! Enjoying.

Joseph May

Date: 7/14/2012 5:31:00 AM

nice imagery Carol...best wishes in the contest...love...Joseph

Don Johnson

Date: 7/13/2012 5:10:00 PM

sunshine hides away, cloudy filtered darkened day, here i say.... we done S C B olay

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 7/13/2012 4:12:00 PM

Wonderful images you planted in my mind....awesome write! Hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/13/2012 1:01:00 PM

oooh, that last line is quite striking! A pretty picture indeed, Carol!

Rachel St.Cross

Date: 7/13/2012 12:12:00 PM

‡ Hearts Collide Too, Dear Sweet Beautiful Carol * Then, The Heavens & The Earth Begin To Melt Amid, Swirls Of Sweet Beauty * I Completely Love This Enchanting Picture * Finding Splendoirs, Beyound The Trees & Thank You * Per Chance Years Would Pass, Deeper I Would Fall * For Your Kind & Wonderful Visit; Dido & Lovely * My Luv, Rachel ‡

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/13/2012 12:04:00 PM

What a wondrous prize of a poem! I just love your incredible talent displayed in this superior write! You will do very well in Gail's contest Carol! I loved your harmonious poem my friend! Great Work!!

Kash Poet

Date: 7/13/2012 11:55:00 AM

Love it Carol!Beautiful imagery!