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In the Dell

securely hidden
small secluded valley...
morning awakens

rainbows of color
flowers glisten with fresh dew...
animals abound

fluffy clouds floating
sunshine brings natural prizms...
heaven, earth collide

happinessnatureupliftinghaiku

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Poet Destroyer A

February 14, 2013 at 8:45 PM

Carol , Stopping by with sincere thanks for your kind comments. It is appreciated more than words or can say... Wishing you the best Valentine's Day YET! Always & Forever :-) LINDA .

Poet Destroyer A

January 11, 2013 at 9:38 PM

a nice little win, once again... I'm waiting for your sunshine to bring prism here.....xox~LINDA

Bl Devnath

November 3, 2012 at 12:20 PM

Wonderful poem on Nature is just read now which I missed earlier. Congratulation of the past just made it present, sorry for late. Loved always, bl

Gail Debole

July 21, 2012 at 7:04 PM

Hi Carol - Congratulations! Favorite lines are "rainbows of color," and "heaven, earth collide." Thank you again for your kind words and positive support regarding my poetry. Hope all is well. - Gail

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

July 21, 2012 at 8:52 AM

Congrats on your amazing win Carol! I love that last line!! :)) Have a wonderful weekend. Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Terry O'Leary

July 20, 2012 at 2:14 PM

Beautiful set... Congratulations on your win... Terry

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

July 19, 2012 at 12:38 PM

congrats Carol on a wonderful win for this amazing scene painted in lovely words my friend.. most gracious to behold..

Barbara Gorelick

July 19, 2012 at 11:45 AM

I want to be there! congrats on a beautiful piece. BG

Kim Merryman

July 18, 2012 at 6:41 PM

I really like this, Carol! A beautiful, picturesque scene. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Andrea Dietrich

July 18, 2012 at 5:27 PM

Big congrats to you on your well deserved win!

Deborah Burch

July 18, 2012 at 2:38 PM

Big Congrats Carol on your win!!! you described an early morning so well...love ya, deb

Sara Kendrick

July 18, 2012 at 1:38 PM

Congrats on your win in the contest..I am sorry that I had missed this one...I enjoyed reading your creative work..Thanks for stopping by with congrats..Sara

Joyce Johnson

July 18, 2012 at 12:58 PM

Nicely done carol. congratulations. Love, Joyce

David Williams

July 18, 2012 at 10:58 AM

Carol congrats on your win. very well portrayed..David

Carol Sunshine Brown

July 18, 2012 at 9:31 AM

Thank you first of all to Gail for my placement in this contest. Thank you all who have read, commented, and the congrats. I apprecite this very much. Love, Carol

David Scott

July 17, 2012 at 12:13 PM

lovely atmosphere nice how you capture the element thankyou also for your comments on my poem xx davidscott

Kacey Greenlee

July 16, 2012 at 4:34 PM

Enchanting words from an amazing poet.Wish you all the best.Thank you so much for dropping by and leaving such kind words about my poem...BALANCE....Have a great week and keep on inspiring others.Sincerely,me

Sherese Gooden

July 14, 2012 at 1:45 PM

Soo vivid! Enjoying.

Joseph May

July 14, 2012 at 5:31 AM

nice imagery Carol...best wishes in the contest...love...Joseph

Don Johnson

July 13, 2012 at 5:10 PM

sunshine hides away, cloudy filtered darkened day, here i say.... we done S C B olay

Cecilia Macfarlane

July 13, 2012 at 4:12 PM

Wonderful images you planted in my mind....awesome write! Hugs

Andrea Dietrich

July 13, 2012 at 1:01 PM

oooh, that last line is quite striking! A pretty picture indeed, Carol!

Rachel St.Cross

July 13, 2012 at 12:12 PM

‡ Hearts Collide Too, Dear Sweet Beautiful Carol * Then, The Heavens & The Earth Begin To Melt Amid, Swirls Of Sweet Beauty * I Completely Love This Enchanting Picture * Finding Splendoirs, Beyound The Trees & Thank You * Per Chance Years Would Pass, Deeper I Would Fall * For Your Kind & Wonderful Visit; Dido & Lovely * My Luv, Rachel ‡

Russell Sivey

July 13, 2012 at 12:04 PM

What a wondrous prize of a poem! I just love your incredible talent displayed in this superior write! You will do very well in Gail's contest Carol! I loved your harmonious poem my friend! Great Work!!