Joanna Daniel Poet Dizain

In the Dappled Shade

"Life is serene on a hammock with the ocean waves crashing behind you"
                                             - by Poet

Beautiful beach beckons, its sand pristine, 
         Crashing wild waves, melody to the soul,
Cacophony of seabirds sounds divine,
         Bathed by the sea, my bare feet take a stroll,
    In constant motion, the sea billows roll;
The ocean has the upper hand, so calm,
          I sit in the dappled shade of the palm,
Swinging in a hammock, resting my eyes,
          The soothing swell in the background, sweet balm,
    Perfect peace envelops me, no surprise!



02.04.2022


For Constance La France's "D forms - Dizain" contest

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Michelle Faulkner February 15, 2022 at 8:41 PM Back to wish you congratulations on your win in the contest, Jo, well done~

Alexis Y. February 15, 2022 at 4:55 PM WoW! Jo, The scene you created is lovely. Well done. Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved. Have a great day-Alexis

Gary Radice February 15, 2022 at 11:44 AM Reading this and I am there. Cheers - Gary

Swetha Vangaveti February 15, 2022 at 10:42 AM Definitely a deserving one for the win :)

Sam Kauffman February 15, 2022 at 10:00 AM Congratulations on your win Jo. I am with you in that picture. Love the image of the hammock and the ocean's life in the background - beautiful contrast. Well done my friend! Congratulations on your win! Sending you blessings of serenity.

Paula Goldsmith February 15, 2022 at 8:18 AM Congratulations on your win. A "Beautiful" write. I wish I was in your hammock. Have a great/blessed day...............

Joseph May February 15, 2022 at 5:26 AM Beautifully written Jo, Congrats on your win

Christuraj Alex February 14, 2022 at 7:14 PM Very enchanting scene. Beautifully written. Congratulations!

Constance La France February 14, 2022 at 2:58 PM Jo, congratulations on your First Place win in my D Form-Dizain contest with your excellent poem and love your quote too ~ Constance

Victor Buhagiar February 10, 2022 at 6:14 AM Splendid dizain. Best for a win.

Gordon Mcconnell February 9, 2022 at 8:31 AM Super write Jo, really lovely rhyme and flow making it so eyecatching. Have a blessed day, Gordon

Mike Bayles February 6, 2022 at 11:48 AM Jo, this is a wonderful poem. I love the rhyme.

Andrea Dietrich February 6, 2022 at 10:28 AM this is gorgeous writing, line. i must do my dizain soon. I hope I can come up with one as wonderful as this.

Michelle Faulkner February 4, 2022 at 8:33 PM The beauty of your beach is captivating, Jo, I too love the 'cacophony of seabirds' and resting in a gentle hammock, truly very peaceful~

Paulette Calasibetta February 4, 2022 at 7:13 AM Your superb imagery has me on that beach even though there is snow and ice all around me. Great write! Good luck in the contest. :) Paulette