In The Colleseum


It doesn't like to be given a name
or a shape to fit within its walls.
It prefers to hide beneath the camouflage 
of noise and sits unmoved by pity, 
stands to lift a downward pointing thumb 
then slinks back into the anonymity of itself 
leaving the dead to dissolve into their own.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Kavanagh  Avatar
July 29, 2025 at 3:21 PM
The Colosseum seems to be playing out live on tv each time I turn it on Paul, A powerful poem on desensitisation to suffering and death, not much has changed throughout human history, thumbs up for this potent piece, cheers David
Willason Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 2:58 PM
Thoughtful summary David...straight to the core. Very much value when you visit bringing that mind of yours. Sorry for the pause in reply. Paul
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 27, 2025 at 5:00 PM
this seems metaphorical to me. This colosseum reminds me of my uncle...he prefered his anonymity and didn't attend funerals...leaving the dead to dissolve on their own. Powerful stuff here, Paul
Willason Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 2:55 PM
Thanks Sara for your comments...interesting recollection the poem prompted. Good to hear it landed somewhere. Apologies for delayed reply. Paul
Fleming Avatar
July 27, 2025 at 4:24 PM
Nicely penned, Paul. Love that finishing line: "leaving the dead to dissolve into their own". Good stuff! :) john P.s I have an unfinished poem about two gladiators...started writing it years ago but never got round to finishing it. Your excellent poem has just inspired me. Many thanks!
Willason Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 2:51 PM
Hi John. Sorry for delay in reply...been elsewhere. Do hope you finish your poem my friend. Honored that my little one may cause you to wrestle yours to completion. Cheers, Paul
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