In The Colleseum


It doesn't like to be given a name
or a shape to fit within its walls.
It prefers to hide beneath the camouflage 
of noise and sits unmoved by pity, 
stands to lift a downward pointing thumb 
then slinks back into the anonymity of itself 
leaving the dead to dissolve into their own.

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Date: 7/29/2025 3:21:00 PM
The Colosseum seems to be playing out live on tv each time I turn it on Paul, A powerful poem on desensitisation to suffering and death, not much has changed throughout human history, thumbs up for this potent piece, cheers David
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Paul Willason
Date: 8/3/2025 2:58:00 PM
Thoughtful summary David...straight to the core. Very much value when you visit bringing that mind of yours. Sorry for the pause in reply. Paul
Date: 7/27/2025 5:00:00 PM
this seems metaphorical to me. This colosseum reminds me of my uncle...he prefered his anonymity and didn't attend funerals...leaving the dead to dissolve on their own. Powerful stuff here, Paul
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Paul Willason
Date: 8/3/2025 2:55:00 PM
Thanks Sara for your comments...interesting recollection the poem prompted. Good to hear it landed somewhere. Apologies for delayed reply. Paul
Date: 7/27/2025 4:24:00 PM
Nicely penned, Paul. Love that finishing line: "leaving the dead to dissolve into their own". Good stuff! :) john P.s I have an unfinished poem about two gladiators...started writing it years ago but never got round to finishing it. Your excellent poem has just inspired me. Many thanks!
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Paul Willason
Date: 8/3/2025 2:51:00 PM
Hi John. Sorry for delay in reply...been elsewhere. Do hope you finish your poem my friend. Honored that my little one may cause you to wrestle yours to completion. Cheers, Paul
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