Notes About The Poem

In the Clearing

Leaves, sticking out tongues
of fire - orange, red, yellow;
their haughtiness over the blower.

Their uproarious laughter is uncalled for!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Hind Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 5:12 PM
Genius, Kim <3
Wolf Avatar
November 22, 2025 at 6:21 PM
The nerve of those leaves. They should just leave that young man alone!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 23, 2025 at 4:37 AM
LOL!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 22, 2025 at 5:43 PM
appreciate audacious autumn. Nicely done. A fun read
Rodrigues Avatar
November 23, 2025 at 4:37 AM
Thank you, Sara!
Swan Avatar
November 22, 2025 at 3:47 AM
Sassiness in Autumn - lovely metaphor :)
Rodrigues Avatar
November 22, 2025 at 5:51 AM
Thank you, Jeanette!
Rolland Avatar
November 21, 2025 at 4:03 PM
nice images, thanks poet
Rodrigues Avatar
November 22, 2025 at 5:51 AM
Thank you :)
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