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In the Castle of Poetry

you write and write until you take off onto your orbit to await your birth, death, or love, to face your gods, obey like a blind man, to say your prayer: thank you, God, thank you for being so good to me and blessing me with a certain amount of forgetfulness

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Date: 2/9/2023 12:34:00 AM
Most interesting thoughts. Love the last line.
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Maria Mitea
Date: 3/30/2023 5:20:00 AM
Yes, it is a blessing, :) All my gratitude for reading, Peter! Have a wonderful day!
Date: 1/28/2023 11:35:00 AM
I like the naughtiness of your poem. Maria, you've done an excellent job. Thanks for your uplifting comment on my
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Maria Mitea
Date: 3/30/2023 5:24:00 AM
Much appreciated, Sotto! Enjoy your day!
Date: 1/15/2023 9:07:00 AM
Splendidly done, Maria. Much enjoyed the vice of your poem.
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Maria Mitea
Date: 1/15/2023 9:18:00 AM
Much gratitude, Vijay! It makes me write your com! :)

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