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In the Beginning - Alternate Start To Human Life

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Lift a baby from water, after decending from the cloud An alternate way to start the world, the vision makes me proud She could be the first earth mother, the start of all mankind The greatest person ever lived, would need an open mind I place her down upon the bank, there to see her grow To take her place in legend, no seeds of doubt to sow I guard her with the power I have, to see her to adult Implant her with a virgin child, wait for the result I plant for her a garden, where the two of them may play Fill it full of bounty, give fresh water they can spray But there is something missing, in the scheme of things to come One a hubby, one a dad, I will combine them into one I will go back to the water, see if another there Cast my vision back and forth, end with a vacant stare Change my gaze up to the beach, and spy a coconut Could be just the thing I need, to use for head or butt I took the finished model, so the Mum could give her view She looked so happy that I thought, I should maybe make her two That is how the human race, started on this earth I am sure that's how it happened, for what my opinion's worth

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Date: 12/11/2019 11:01:00 PM
Warren, this was fun, unique and interesting to read. Nicely done! :)
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