In the Backstreets of My Mind

In my mind’s backstreets lurks Miss Insistence Pushing self-interest and preference Questioning my worshipful reverence: “Are you staying in the Lord’s residence As immune from sin-virus’ decadence?” With angst trying to prevail in my heart My mind welcomes Mr. Deceit’s sham art Magnifying pride with arrogance-dart Mocking my yielded soul to God’s rampart As if saying “You’re wrong right from the start.” Mrs. Doubt attacks my faith’s fortitude Challenging intellectual attitude Jeopardizing jubilant gratitude So, I can’t soar beyond praise altitude As my mind jeers, “Oh, what grand beatitude!” Striving for bliss-filled, bursts with laughter-glee I, from life grievous pressures, dare to flee While Sister Mirth lingers in my mind’s spree Saying, “Show countenance beauty, stress-free Of delightful fruits from contentment-tree.” By God’s victory, I aim to prevail Despite Misery Woes-Foes which assail My soul seeks the Lord Who hears my wail Sharing His love and kindness that don’t fail… In the backstreets of my mind*, God I hail!
*1Peter 1:13 Wherefore gird up the loins of your mind, be sober, and hope to the end for the grace that is to be brought unto you at the revelation of Jesus Christ. September 24, 2019 (Dramatic Monologue with Rhyme Form) 2nd place, "In the backstreets of my mind" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Silent One; judged on 9/26/2019.
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Simon Avatar
October 1, 2019 at 2:14 PM
Congratulations on writing an awesome poem. I really love this love poem.
Andresen Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 4:20 AM
- Congratulations on your well written winning poem, Beata :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 5:50 PM
boy, you have quite the cast of characters in the backstreets of your mind!!! Some of them would drive me crazy!! I enjoyed this creative piece, Beata. Congrats for your win.
La France Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 4:16 PM
Beata congratulations on your win in the contest with this excellent poem!
One Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 3:46 PM
nice use of language.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Mcintosh Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 11:23 PM
This is a wonderful poem for the contest. Blessings
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