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Ink's Boulevard of the Beloved Contest ~ 9/1/26

In the Aura of Astral Skies

There are 'once upon a time' stories in my life
those that took place on shadowed streets
while captive and caged behind a bastion of bars
when Luna's luminance cast no silver shadows
and night blooming jasmine held her perfume
Alone in loneliness I shivered and sighed
Stillness brewed too long is a bitter tea
Pale the glow of moonlight washing over me
but I know the moon is an honest manipulator
because she's the one who imprisoned me.

I lost my way reaching for stars and fell apart 
like unstrung pearls rolling in the dreary dark
My heart was a dying ember without a spark
a fragile flower withered on the ground
candle wax melting when its flame was snuffed
I whimpered in whispers on dismally dark nights
a grain of sand that refused to fall in the hourglass

A thousand tears I have wasted weeping, 
while waiting for heartache to pass
I filled the night's chalice with knots of desire
and my thirst for love ~ left unsated
for there were no fiery flames 
to keep the pulse of passion burning.

My eyelashes flutter with wishful reveries
as I grasp the tormenting truth of reality
And yet my hassled heart is left wondering~ 
If time turns, will scars stain the sky?
Will there be someone to turn grey to blue
who will be able to heal the hurt inside?
Be kind, haloed moon to keep my hope alive.

I learned how to live unkissed, until I heard
a timbered voice reading poetry
but whose face was concealed by starlight
My senses were seduced, awakened as if
by the aura of astral skies
I praised the mysterious man for his reading
of what he undoubtedly thought was a soliloquy.

"Your name dear sir, if you please."
and felt the warmth of my cheeks blushing.
I waited for his reply, and softly spoken,
he whispered, "I am called, Allain
Tie me to your tongue to hear more
and if you move closer, in sweet repose
I shall recite tales of wildflowers, but none
as lovely as the glimmer in your eyes."

He, not I stepped closer...
Enchanted and eager, I listened to his droll
then beseeched if he could hold my hand
and pleaded for my cheek to kiss
I could almost hear waves crashing ashore,
I was caught in a storm of ardent madness
and demurely replied when I'd caught my breath,
 "I think not, sir. You are a stranger, but
It's raining roses and love riots!"
He responded with a timbered laugh
then on he read, my sighs inexorably escaping 
With each encore I yearned for more...
while we held fast to each other in intimate rapport
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Smith nee Howarth Avatar
September 17, 2026 at 9:25 PM
A beautifully immersive free-verse narrative, rich with lunar imagery, longing, and the gradual thawing of a wounded heart. The shifting movement from captivity and desolation into starlit enchantment feels almost cinematic, while the recurring music of alliteration and sensual phrasing gives the encounter a dreamy, spellbound atmosphere. Congratulations on your win in the contest.👏🌹
Empress Avatar
September 17, 2026 at 3:03 AM
"A thousand tears I have wasted weeping, while waiting for heartache to pass I filled the night's chalice with knots of desire and my thirst for love ~ left unsated for there were no fiery flames to keep the pulse of passion burning." piercingly poignant! My heart quivered! Thank you for supporting my contest. Pleasure readin you Congratulations on your top win Sending you light always 🏆
Lane Avatar
September 17, 2026 at 8:09 AM
Ya know, Ink... by now I can usually tell which lines will appeal to you. I'm glad you chose a verse in which I used one of your prompt phrases. Your light is always welcome.🌙
Empress Avatar
September 17, 2026 at 3:02 AM
This is so real, so touching, soulfully moving dear Linnersz, I felt every line in this poem and youve used the prompts so well here, bringing them to life, its not just the emotional layers but also the way youv painted imagery throughout that stood out for me really! The little details and the way you weave them words, using so many poetic techniques, makes this an impeccable write! The longing, that flows, truly left me feeling! I especially love the penultimate stanza and the one before.
Lane Avatar
September 17, 2026 at 8:07 AM
The prompts you offered were made to entwine, so I used them where I thought best. I'm super delighted that you found my entry to your liking and I gratefully thank you for offering it a generous placement in your contest... In other words... I'm thrilled!!!⭐😍
Gibbons Avatar
September 1, 2026 at 2:42 PM
Wow dear Lin another devine masterpiece , picture is so perfect too for the ✍️ " while captured and caged behind a bastion of bars " powerful imagery Lin reminded me of Maya Angelou " I know why the caged bird sings" love her writings but love urs more ❤️ 😍 I know why we get on so well both got great imaginations and write from heart n soul ❤️ powerful " pale the glow of moonlight washing over me" powerful ending full of passion 🔥 run out characters🥹 fav 4r sure hugzzz 🫂🦋🌹💋
Lane Avatar
September 17, 2026 at 8:05 AM
Scotty Dotti, your compliments are far too great for anyone to live up to! However, I always smile knowing that you appreciate my verses and that means ever so much to me. Thank you, my dear forever friend. 💕
Cunningham Avatar
September 1, 2026 at 12:55 PM
Your imagery is on another level Lin, unstrung pearls rolling in dreary dark. A longing for romance? did both their sparks ignite ? You have great imagination, this one leaves the door open for a sequel. Tom🌹
Lane Avatar
September 1, 2026 at 1:17 PM
Merci, Tom. Rarely have I ever written a sequel to any of my poems. lol I'm not sure where I was going with the ending to this one, and it certainly didn't go in the same direction as the first verses. I'm not one to have my female protagonist turn coquettish but after being without a love interest, I didn't want her jumping the first guy who came along... a fine reader of Sonnets or not! She had to have more class and reserve than that, despite admitting it was raining roses and love riots. I had to make this lass a titch more chill. 😊 🥰
Parker Avatar
September 1, 2026 at 11:29 AM
wow! Lin I like where your poetic muse went with this poem, the emotions felt and traveled, the wishes that became romance...nicely done, dear poet
Lane Avatar
September 1, 2026 at 11:44 AM
Dear Frederic, I'm delighted that you enjoyed the road this one traveled upon. Thank you ever so much for your time of reading and reviewing.
Alhemaidy Avatar
September 1, 2026 at 10:47 AM
Lovely romantic poem!
Lane Avatar
September 1, 2026 at 11:42 AM
Thanks very much, AA. 🌸
Rodgers Avatar
September 1, 2026 at 8:44 AM
Dear Lin, a nice sweeping, beautifully atmospheric narrative poem balancing the deep loneliness with the sudden, breathtaking spark of romantic awakening. I like the dialogue between the narrator and Allain that has a charming, courtly wit, especially the playful hesitation of declaring him a stranger even as "love riots" break out around them. Lin, a captivating, beautifully crafted narrative poem! Blessings, Daniel
Lane Avatar
September 1, 2026 at 11:42 AM
Sincere thanks for finding these lines to your liking, Daniel. I pushed a titch to use all five of Ink's suggested themes, so I was afraid that the ending may have been a little out of character, but merci for seeing the 'courtly wit' I used. I'm grateful for your continued reading of my poetry.
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