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In the Air Is It Thinly ---Question Mark

Vibrations quiver in smoke-filled volcanoes or parlors not much difference. You suck mine, I'll suck yours both of us feelin' for stuff that don't suck. The difference between a fist and a palm.. umm.. why is that not “duh!!”? Mysteries, histories and so on...

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Date: 12/8/2011 6:32:00 AM
Never entirely sure what you say, but I love it. I think 'KAPOW' is the fist; 'smack', the palm. That's what they sound like on me. I can't remember what 'suck' sounds like.
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Date: 12/7/2011 9:23:00 PM
I'm trying to find words to say for this piece yet i can't find it. left me dumbfounded Nancy, it's the: Mysteries, histories and so on... ^.~
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