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In the Afterglow of Day

My longing lips~ shriveled by the saffron sun waiting for your summer kisses were like ivory jasmine waiting for a drop of rain to land on her petite petals. Ah, to kiss you once again how could I hold off? The first delicate drop of summer rain was sweet~ as sweet as your rosy lips engulfing mine~ making me live again amidst scorching light making August a summer splendour. Now it's September but still I feel the warm ember as I watch birds fly in the early autumn sky imagining your sophic silhouette meeting mine~ in the afterglow of day. 5 September 2020 COMPLETELY YOUR CHOICE(3) any theme any form Contest Judged: 9/4/2020 9:34:00 PM Sponsored by: Brian Strand 1st place

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Date: 11/7/2020 9:51:00 AM
this one sounds so familiar to me. at least part of it and yet I see no comment of mine beneath it. Anyway, I LOVE this . A FAVE Belated congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 9/7/2020 11:19:00 AM
A beautiful write with vivid imagery, love the word afterglow, reminds me of my poem Your afterglow lingers, I love saffron sun as well, the name of my latest write. Well done JCB!
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Date: 9/5/2020 2:09:00 PM
so pretty and romantically said...really enjoyed the 2nd verse...the first delicate drop of summer rain was sweet/ as sweet as you rosy lips...divine
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