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In the 70's

Came back to Texas in seventy two - I'd seen California - no more to do. I remembered a girl, was she still here? Matter of fact there were four that were dear. So I did look them up - one at a time - Three were wed and the fourth wasted a dime. Ah, but I was young and glad to be back. I was single with one suitcase to pack. So roam I did from desert to river. Summers I'd sweat and Winters I'd shiver. I cowboyed a while and dug some for oil - Lived in the mesquite where sand was the soil. Met lots of women but never found one That gave me a reason to say I'm done. So here I lay pushin' all those years back - An old, old man with one suitcase to pack. 2/21/18 For Line Gauthier's contest "Where were you in the 70's"

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Date: 3/11/2018 1:50:00 AM
This is great, Larry, you old Hobo. Love that wandering carefree vibe. Keep on trucking!
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Date: 3/10/2018 6:42:00 PM
This almost reminded me of a good country song !! Put to music it would be a hit !! Well done!!
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Date: 3/10/2018 2:09:00 PM
Congratulation on your win! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 3/10/2018 10:02:00 AM
Heartfelt poem, Larry. You made reminisce about my brother quite a bit and about the price of years of freedom. It's a touching read. Thanks for entering. Congrats on a top win.
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Date: 2/21/2018 9:27:00 PM
Hi Larry! Love this poem. It rhymes and flows so easily with a perfect ending. Good luck in the contest.
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 2/21/2018 9:56:00 PM
Thanks for the "heads up" . I'll bet I looked at that half a dozen times and didn't see it. Big help!
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Carole Duet
Date: 2/21/2018 9:42:00 PM
P.S. I meant to tell you to check your 10th line. You wrote/typed the word, "and", twice.
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 2/21/2018 9:32:00 PM
Thank you so much, Carole!

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