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In Stone

He is not considerate, he has no heart, and from his life, I soon will part. He is a drunk, so hateful, and mean, one of the devilish, I have ever seen. He prepares fine steaks, upon his grill, for he, and his son, to get their fill. After the beer, they sit, and smile, ignoring me, all the while. When I leave, and the papers come, he will ask himself, what have I done. Drunks don't change, they live to destroy, just like old devils, this is their joy. My children say run, mom, don't hang around, this old man that drinks, will keep you down. My life is a mess, I am so alone, and one thing for certain, feelings can't grow in stone.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/5/2009 6:01:00 AM
Powerful write and full of emotions. As they say a girl's got to do what she has to do. You must be lead of the Lord in whatever decision you make. In my prayers..
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Date: 6/21/2009 7:56:00 AM
Strong write here Christy, if he can't change your future does, where it is your right - to be a free flying dove>>James
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Date: 6/21/2009 1:47:00 AM
Life was meant to be spent with the people you love, and in return, love you, the same. If not on an equal playing field, with some of them, then it is time, to set them free, and just leave them alone, to themselves. Good right; Sean
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Date: 6/20/2009 10:41:00 PM
Your children are right, Christy. No one should live with someone who adds so much pain to their life. You put your precious heart into this poem and I hope you heed your children's advice. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/20/2009 10:22:00 PM
Christy, we are here, you are not alone, sweet poems are waiting for you to write! hurry! joy is just ahead!!! love, jim
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Date: 6/20/2009 9:14:00 PM
Christy I have been corresponding with you for a couple of years now and I haven't seen a bit of change from the expressions of your words. Only so much should anyone tolerate whether it be male or female. Don't stay in something and suffer, if he is as bad as you say, I know I would just pack up and go. Bless you my friend. Ron
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