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Written for "In Stars Above" This or That Volume 34

contest June 19 2025 sponsored by Edward Ibeh

 

You left this world a better place Your soul is purest light solid gold No longer concerned with human race Up above beyond the earthly trolls White wind blows in your gentle kiss Butterfly wings remind me of you In red heart it’s you we miss As we sit staring at sky black or blue In stars above you thrive my love No lavender loss only green gain In God’s hands who you do trust Healing rain no longer purple pain Above you hear most heavenly voice No teal tears or fuchsia fears rejoice

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Date: 6/19/2025 8:31:00 PM
There is hope in heaven. These are lovely thoughts.
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Karen Jones
Date: 6/29/2025 6:40:00 PM
Thanks dear Hilda!
Date: 6/19/2025 10:43:00 AM
This is so creative the way you use colors in the phrases. Great take on the theme
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Karen Jones
Date: 6/19/2025 11:47:00 AM
Thanks Andrea!

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