In Starlight Time

The beauty of a galaxy 
Is heavenly
A tapestry of dreams in speckled light
Beneath a lilac tree
You made love to me
More tenderly than truly at first sight

My ecstasy is suddenly
A raging sea
A misery so deep it will not die
In this, my fantasy
Of love, eternally
Your memory is with me by and by...

I don't know why the stars on high
Are shining still
Mocking me at will
The virgin snow
Reflects a warm hello
But I am colder for the chill

Like a Whippoorwill
In the throes of deep December
When Autumn leaves still blow
In dreams of late September
And smiles I remember
For the glow

Beside the train that night
We said goodbye
You were born to fly
Somewhere on the breeze
The scent of lilac trees
Still brings a teardrop to my eye

In a lullaby
Or a song of sweet persuasion
If reason follows rhyme 
Where all my dreams come true
My thoughts will be of you
In starlight time.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 5/23/2021 6:58:00 AM
Excellent work, B!
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Date: 2/6/2021 7:31:00 PM
Glad to find this lovely poem published in the 2020 PS Anthology, Bryan ~
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Bryan Norton
Date: 2/7/2021 7:18:00 PM
Line, glad you came across my poem. I'm very glad you liked it. It was inspired by a song, an old one, called "Stardust." That song has my favorite verse of all time, and, accordingly, "In Starlight Time" is my favorite self-penned poem. Admittedly, "Stardust" is still much, much better. Goodnight!
Date: 6/23/2020 4:10:00 PM
A belated congrats in whatever contest this had been entered in. I can see Greg's sweet comment to you. He is such a nice friend.
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Date: 6/23/2020 4:09:00 PM
Thanks for reminding me to see this one, Bryan. It is really good and quite evocative, just like the beautiful song you mentioned to me. I am pretty sure I know that song already. Yes, this is one of your best poems, at least from what I have read of you so far. Sorry it took me so long to get to this one. Great imagery too! (I loved the repeated reference to lilac tree)
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Date: 6/6/2020 8:35:00 PM
Whimsical, romantic and charming - another sublime write, Bryan, and a well-deserved placement! I adore the rhythm, (the musician in me, I suppose), and the lilt of phrasing, as well as the plaid weave of my favorite muses - nature and romance. Wonderful poem, my friend, and another fave, (perhaps I should just fave them all?) ... congrats and blessings! :o)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/13/2020 2:57:00 PM
I see you are as critical of your own work as I am, my friend, and while that keeps us striving, we must try to be as kind to ourselves as we are to others ... yeah, really hard, that, I know, but our light must shine to help warm the world. Always a work in progress! Blessings, Friend!
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Bryan Norton
Date: 6/6/2020 9:42:00 PM
You better not fave them all. Most of them are pretty bad! Nevertheless, thank you again for your comments. I really enjoy and respect what you have to say. I just hope I can keep up with you, and all the other great poets on PoetrySoup. Take care, my friend.
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