In Sorrowed Shadows

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Posy petal’d tear drops
on saffron colored morns
fall deeply in sorrowed shadows
where sunshine is merely a reflection
of the beauty once shared

Clouded days sing dreary sonnets
and the sunflowers are sad,
for those cherished wings 
of brilliant colors
are gone from this field

Now a misty shade of gray
lingering in the thoughts
of one so missed…
finds the garden gates locked,
never to open again

Where rainbows once painted blue hydrangea skies
and daffodil promises carried our smiles, 
heartache now gathers in shapeless corners, 
missing this butterfly 
all had so come to adore

and the earth weeps…


10/18/16

Written for the Words Drowned In Tears Poetry – Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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October 25, 2016 at 6:37 PM
Chris congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautifully penned poem
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October 26, 2016 at 8:02 AM
Thank you so very much Broken Wings. I am honored you enjoyed this one.
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October 24, 2016 at 1:46 AM
Love this verse Dear Chris.. a very well written poem ...a weeping earth!. Congratulations on your win//love, ANU:)
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October 24, 2016 at 8:24 AM
Thank you so very much Anu for your kind words.
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October 24, 2016 at 1:41 AM
You use beautiful imagery in your poem, so lively, I can see it as an image. Congratulations.
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October 24, 2016 at 8:23 AM
I am glad you can Darren. Thanks so much for commenting on my poem.
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October 23, 2016 at 7:16 PM
Love this beautiful verse, Chris.. a very well written poem. Congratulations on your win....Hugs eve
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October 24, 2016 at 8:23 AM
Thanks so very much Eve, I am happy you liked it.
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October 18, 2016 at 9:57 PM
Hi Chris, This is good entry for the contest theme.It's a sad yet beautiful piece. I wish you the best of luck for the contest. Thanks for visiting my page. :-) Alexis
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October 19, 2016 at 8:40 AM
Thank you so very much Alexis for your kind words. I appreciate you stopping by my poem.
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October 18, 2016 at 8:33 PM
I can feel the pang of absence and loss in your poem dear friend.and it touches my heart.: ).
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October 19, 2016 at 8:39 AM
Thank you for reading and leaving such nice comments for me Charmaine. I appreciate your thoughts and your encouragement.
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October 18, 2016 at 6:53 PM
This is very beautiful written , Chris.. thank you for sharing Hugs
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October 19, 2016 at 8:38 AM
Thank you so very much Eve for your kind words.
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October 18, 2016 at 6:41 PM
Very beautiful Chris, you can tell you have the painters eye in this /|\
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October 19, 2016 at 8:38 AM
Thanks so very much Rick for reading and commenting on my poem.
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October 18, 2016 at 5:30 PM
You're killing me with your sorrow Chris, you had to drag butterflies into it? I meant good luck with the contest, now I need a tissue...
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October 19, 2016 at 8:38 AM
Thank you Paloma, sorry, fresh out of tissues, I have a paper towel. :) I appreciate your kind words my friend. I always look forward to your visits.
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October 18, 2016 at 5:23 PM
yeah thats nice Chris
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October 19, 2016 at 8:37 AM
Thanks so very much Grant
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