In search of sympathy

All have hassles their own, 
All with own fate upset, 
With whom to pour my heart?
Under roof-- one common 
All suffer self-sown fate, 
With whom to pour my heart?

Sad tales, not so unknown, 
They all seem to narrate, 
With whom to pour my heart?
No one is left alone 
If we search, sort, ferret, 
With whom to pour my heart?  

Blares every gramophone,
Each all so aloud set, 
With whom to pour my heart?
All have a chewing bone 
Their own, and no free date, 
With whom to pour my heart?

O to wait for that dawn 
Where world is not jet set
To pour my bleeding heart.
Till then I’ve to just frown 
And endure,  my teeth grate, 
Till I’ve souls to pour heart.

All people tend to moan 
It’s this nature I hate-- 
Too ready to pour heart.  
With all in such zone 
That keeps an ajar gate 
To cry, where I my heart?
____________________
Ghazal |16.02.2025| sympathy, heart    
Note: The six lines of each stanza here in essence make only a couplet--just two lines. There are two rhymes and two refrains.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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