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fleeing urban smog seeking chance to breathe again nature’s kiss of life --------------------------- 31st January, 2016 Contest: Haiku 101 Sponsor: Nathan D. Placed 2nd

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CayCay Jennings

Date: 2/14/2016 8:39:00 AM

Extinction, pollution - 2 poems dealing with major issues read in a row, by me, on this brand new day. So glad you are meeting these issues head-on in your writings as I try to wake everyone up about litter. We must deal with these issues w/o letting depression take us. So glad of all like-minded people and their presence on our shared planet. All this to say, I like your Haiku and Congratulate you on your win ... CayCay

Paul Callus
Date: 2/14/2016 12:28:00 PM

We cannot close our eyes to world problems, CayCay; the situation is already bad enough. Politically we have little say, but at least we can raise awareness through our poetry. Thank you for liking and commenting! ~ Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/10/2016 5:36:00 PM

awesome win, my friend. BIG congrats

Paul Callus
Date: 2/10/2016 5:42:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea; your twilight eruption kept us looking in awe at that top first place:) // paul

John Lawless

Date: 2/10/2016 1:33:00 PM

Well done Paul, congrats on the placement in the contest

Paul Callus
Date: 2/10/2016 2:44:00 PM

Thank you John. There were many worthy winners in this contest, yours amongst them! // paul

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/10/2016 1:12:00 PM

truly a nature lover, paul.. sweet congrats on your award!..huggs

Paul Callus
Date: 2/10/2016 2:43:00 PM

Thank you, Nette; you did well yourself:) hugs // paul

Sandra Haight

Date: 2/10/2016 8:21:00 AM

Paul, congratulations on your fine 2nd Place win! Nice Haiku. Sandra

Paul Callus
Date: 2/10/2016 2:45:00 PM

Thank you Sandra; both visit and congrats are appreciated. ~ Regards // paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 2/10/2016 4:08:00 AM

Great haiku n win Paul.. big congrats!! I hv missed reading ur work!!

Paul Callus
Date: 2/10/2016 2:41:00 PM

Many thanks, Upma. Hope you are keeping well:) Take care. // paul

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/10/2016 12:09:00 AM

Paul, Congrats on your "Haiku 101" win. LINDA

Paul Callus
Date: 2/10/2016 2:32:00 PM

Thank you, Linda; always welcome to stop by:) // paul

Susan Gentry

Date: 2/9/2016 11:45:00 PM

Congratulations on this awesome haiku!

Paul Callus
Date: 2/10/2016 2:01:00 PM

Thank you Susan. I also enjoyed your entry for this contest. ~ Regards // paul

Nathan D.

Date: 2/9/2016 9:05:00 PM

Thanks Paul

Paul Callus
Date: 2/10/2016 1:49:00 PM

Thank you Nathan; I'm truly pleased to feature highly on your winners' list. Your contest has inspired many beautiful entries; I enjoyed reading all the winning ones. ~ Regards // paul

David Mohn

Date: 2/9/2016 8:44:00 PM

big congrats to you on this beauty Paul...mine was lost in the amber clouds :)

Paul Callus
Date: 2/10/2016 1:47:00 PM

Thank you, David! Sorry about your entry...both your recent haiku have been of a high level. ~ Regards // paul

Iris E. Sankey- Lewis

Date: 2/9/2016 11:23:00 AM

Quite imaginative win.

Paul Callus
Date: 2/9/2016 12:06:00 PM

Thank you Iris; glad you liked it, and pleased to have you visiting. ~ Regards // paul

Kp Nunez

Date: 2/4/2016 6:36:00 PM

Excellent take on the prompt, Paul. Glad to see your entries to several contests...hugs!

Paul Callus
Date: 2/5/2016 12:58:00 PM

I am pleased that you like it, Kim. The picture prompted some inspiring ideas, but none were easy to express in just 3 lines. Have not had much time for writing, too many other priorities! Thank you for the encouragement:) hugs // paul

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/3/2016 11:12:00 PM

This picture somehow reminds me of Africa. This beautiful haiku you have created was inspired by this stunning photo Paul. Best of luck in the contest. I was too late to enter so posted my attempt at pft. Cheers, Connie

Paul Callus
Date: 2/4/2016 9:46:00 AM

It's a pity you failed to enter the contest, Connie; I read your lovely haiku on pft, and it would have done very well. I'm pleased that you enjoyed my offering ... thank you. Regards // paul

Sandra Adams

Date: 2/3/2016 5:52:00 PM

wonderfully written, i like where you went with this image! Good luck in the contest!

Paul Callus
Date: 2/4/2016 8:25:00 AM

Thank you Sandra; pleased with both your comments and visit! Regards // paul

David Mohn

Date: 2/2/2016 4:38:00 PM

I'm holding my breath you'll grace the winner's list with this beauty Paul...love the theme

Paul Callus
Date: 2/3/2016 2:34:00 PM

Many thanks, David. Have read your entry, and it's way better than this one! ~ Regards // paul

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/2/2016 7:56:00 AM

this 'ku is alive, paul.. lovely rendition!.. huggs

Paul Callus
Date: 2/2/2016 1:43:00 PM

Thank you Nette. I read your entry and in my eyes it's a winner! hugs // paul

Viv Wigley

Date: 2/1/2016 11:57:00 PM

A three line breath of fresh air, much needed today. Thanks for that, Paul, a #7. Regards, Viv

Paul Callus
Date: 2/2/2016 1:42:00 PM

Breathe in...breathe out...ahhhh feels good:) Thank you for the nice visit, my friend! ~ Regards // paul

Cherl Dunn

Date: 2/1/2016 7:25:00 PM

Dear Paul Bravo perfection in pic and in words, simply delightful and utterly moving, jusit a splended piece of poetic art of poetry, loved every line, keep up this magnificent work my dear friend, and I'm flattered by your comments on mine, thanks for the pat on the back I needed it my friend, cheri

Paul Callus
Date: 2/2/2016 2:28:00 PM

Thank you Cherl:) You are a generous critic and most welcome visitor:) Hope you are keeping well. ~ Warm regards // paul

Emile Pinet

Date: 2/1/2016 5:54:00 PM

This is very well penned with deep thoughts. The strength of your words and thoughts comes out well in this poem. Emile.

Paul Callus
Date: 2/2/2016 1:40:00 PM

So pleased that you look at this 3 liner with positive eyes, Emile! Thank you! // paul

Skat A

Date: 2/1/2016 3:08:00 PM

Paul, love the ending line. The best of luck in the contest. SKAT

Paul Callus
Date: 2/1/2016 3:10:00 PM

Thank you Skat. Perhaps it should be me wishing you the best of luck:) Take care. ~ Hugs // paul

Judy Konos

Date: 1/31/2016 5:56:00 PM

This is excellent but I am disappointed that you did not come out in the Rice Fields to look for the sliced cabbage with me!

Paul Callus
Date: 2/1/2016 4:20:00 PM

Glad you like it, Judy. But I did stop at your rice fields! You have to look harder:) As for cabbages....have you ever cooked stuffed cabbages, with eggs, cheese and bacon?...delicious!! // paul

Elaine George

Date: 1/31/2016 5:05:00 PM

Excellent Haiku, Paul. A very difficult form to do well...but you certainly have.

Paul Callus
Date: 2/1/2016 3:46:00 PM

Thank you Elaine. It was not easy, for in reality, the picture makes me think of devastation. ~ Regards // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/31/2016 4:53:00 PM

- Lovely - Good luck in contest, Paul - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus
Date: 2/1/2016 3:40:00 PM

Thank you for reading and liking, Anne Lise! ~ Hugs // paul