In Search of Love

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From my window, a dove Searched for love. Where did she hide, Dawn crept silently: I listened to my labyrinth of love. Purple petals fluttered on the dewy grass, A silken web was shown through the light of dawn. My dove cooed from the tree Alas, my love had gone.

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Eve Roper

Date: 8/21/2024 4:17:00 PM

A beautiful poem with warm feelings and imagery. Hugs my friend

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

Date: 8/14/2024 12:57:00 PM

I love doves and I observe them a lot. This is really emotive and so beautiful my friend.!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/11/2024 4:35:00 PM

How lovely this is, Victor.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 8/11/2024 2:51:00 PM

Doves, an apparently sweet bird, that can be nothing else but what is expected of them. Perhaps love is often this way. Does love survive a few grouchy days? You have me asking.

Silent One

Date: 8/11/2024 1:28:00 PM

Lovely poem dear Victor.. I like the arrangement of words here..

Ink Empress

Date: 8/11/2024 5:13:00 AM

Ah the way you paint imagery is stunning and beautifully captivating dear victor: while also you always ensure you do deliver emotions and this youv done so well here in your last lines! Brilliant write! Beautiful pic to go with your poem! Pleasure reading your work: sending you light always