In Search of Genius: a Poet's Agony

My search for the perfect last line
can be hellish or something quite divine.
I never end a work of genius with something less,
for if I did I'd never live down the shame, I must confess.

 I sometimes shake my head in disbelief
 at the dysfunction of my brain when in grief
 and consternation. I am besieged by a muddled mind.
 And still I search for the elusive ending. The one I cannot find.

 And when I believe I have found the solution
 I am given a critique by one who gives me absolution.
 Be Silent, moron, if your foolish words are merely to placate!
 Be gone with your false chatter. There is nothing more that I hate.

 An unfinished work of art is a terrible bane,
 and the fact is, that thought in not entirely profane.
 I've been known to scream phrases of irreverent profanity
 while plagued without resolution. I am cursed with near insanity.

 All the wrong words keep echoing in my head.
 An unfinished poem is by far the worse thing I dread.
 I will not sign my name to poetry unless I consider it clever.
 I get frustrated while searching for a final line, but give up? Never!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 7/23/2016 10:11:00 AM
Seeing the thread below, I will add in my two cents. yes, patterns of meter are nice ,but NOT necessary. you are so right about that, Marti. Poetic license gives us the freedom to NOT stick to specific syllable counts and you, my friend, HAVE a poet's license!!!
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Date: 7/23/2016 10:06:00 AM
well now, THIS one has an ending , AND a fine message. NEVER GIVE UP. NEVER!!
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Date: 7/22/2016 9:47:00 AM
Very nice rhyme, love the flow, feelings of frustration we all face, struggling to find the right words, others who don't write could never understand, but what sheer ecstasy it is when the words come together, and when they don't well we have different ways of dealing with that!Loved it!
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Date: 7/22/2016 7:32:00 AM
Your poem made me smile Marti especially as I have about 20 poems that are work in progress - yes we all search for that perfect line Marti - one day I may find it:-) hugs jan xx
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