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In Search of Cloud

summer sun burns slow 
the verdance of meek meadow…
auburn grass bows down

blazed tree canopies
search for clouds in smoky sky…
when will monsoon come

June 24, 2020
Syllable count : 5/7/5
Checked on howmanysyllables.com
Contest : Summer Haiku's
Sponsor : Tania Kitchin

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Date: 6/29/2020 3:10:00 PM
A great Haiku. Congratulations on your win. This is well deserved.
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Date: 6/29/2020 2:20:00 AM
the verdance of meek meadow.. Lovely Haikus.. Congratulations on your win Subimal..
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Date: 6/28/2020 5:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Subimal. Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/28/2020 4:11:00 PM
Subimal, congratulations on your winning placement with your lovely haiku's!
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Date: 6/24/2020 3:59:00 PM
Very nice :) I hope all is well!
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