Eileen Manassian Poet Iambic Pentameter

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In Room Enclosed, We Travel

This Valentine, my love, will be divine
I’ll whisk you off to every place and clime
In room enclosed, we’ll travel round the globe
Enchantment waits for us as we disrobe

You'll lay me down on sandy island shore
“Pretend” our game, adventure calls for more
With sweetness on your lips, mine own you'll kiss
A taste that rivals chocolate from the Swiss

I'll whisper tales of wild Arabian Nights
And plop into your mouth Turkish Delights
I'll play the part of harem girl, then maid
Then Warrior Princess come your heart to raid

I’ll shower you with kisses, sweet and wet
And make you lose your clothes on poker bet
Those Vegas lights will twinkle in my eyes
Then off to masquerade in a disguise

Our bodies fuse on our gondola dream
We skinny dip into Venetian stream 
The scented candles dim and light peeks in
Your glow, my love, your scent is on my skin

The world is you; you are my every place
There is no beauty finer than your face
This very room where you've made love to me
Is paradise and where I long to be

January 22, 2015
For Mystic Rose's Valentine Contest

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Shane Cooper February 2, 2015 at 4:57 AM Congratulations on the first place it is another great piece of writing What else is one to expect from the desert orchid. love Shane xxx

Skat A February 1, 2015 at 3:47 PM Love how you are in touch with every line on this poem Eileen, Awesome magic win.... CONGRATS luv ~ SKAT ~

Richard Lamoureux February 1, 2015 at 8:41 AM I am not surprised to see this one in the top position Eileen! Congratulations!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty February 1, 2015 at 2:53 AM The stage is yours Wondera XXXX rajat CONGRATS ON WIN Eileen Manassian February 1, 2015 at 2:55 AM Thanks, Rajat. It's a stage I love to be on. :) Hugs

Debbie Guzzi January 31, 2015 at 6:53 PM Congrad's on Your win. So pleasant to read your verse this evening. Light & Love Eileen Manassian February 1, 2015 at 2:55 AM Thanks for passing by my Valentine write, Debbie...I enjoyed your comment. :)

Joyce Johnson January 31, 2015 at 12:22 AM Great win and a valentine to cherish. Congratulations. Eileen Manassian January 31, 2015 at 1:24 PM Thanks, Joyce. I appreciate your kind words on my Valentine poem.

Dr.Ram Mehta January 30, 2015 at 11:19 PM Superb cascade of emotions and feelings, congrats on the win, Eileen Eileen Manassian January 31, 2015 at 1:24 PM Thank you, Dr Ram. I was moved by your write.

Sandra Haight January 30, 2015 at 7:45 PM Wow...such a wonderful, romantic poem, Eileen! So nicely written in one of my favorite forms. A heartfelt congratulations on your First Place win! Sandra Eileen Manassian January 31, 2015 at 1:25 PM Sandra...thanks for your lovely visit to my Valentine poem. I do appreciate it. :) Hugs

Carrie Richards January 30, 2015 at 7:33 PM Whhoohoo....this is an invitation to romance, all beautiful wrapped into a Valentine message ! Congratulations, Eileen on your winning poem~!! Eileen Manassian January 30, 2015 at 7:36 PM Thanks ever so much, Carrie. I played to my audience, Vienna. She wanted a trip around the world. I enjoyed trying to come up with different places. I even googled most romantic places in the world! ;) Surprisingly...Istanbul, Turkey was on the list. Hubby and daughter just went there. I had to stay behind because of my teaching schedule...Oh well. Thanks ever so much for taking the time to read and comment. I'm so grateful for your visit. Hugs

Jan Allison January 30, 2015 at 6:13 PM Such a beautiful romantic write - well deserved first place for the queen of romance:-) Hugs Jan xxx Eileen Manassian January 30, 2015 at 6:54 PM Awww....thank you Jan. I must tell you...I'm absolutely thrilled that Vie favored my poem. How sweet of her!!! I'm basking in the glow. Thanks for sharing the moment with me. Hugs

Paul Callus January 30, 2015 at 5:23 PM Congratulations dear Eileen!!! Gold medal winner for an excellent poem which promised a lot from the word GO! Hugs // paul Eileen Manassian January 30, 2015 at 6:55 PM :) Did it really? I'm so so pleased you liked this piece, Paul. I'm so grateful that Vienna smiled on this. Thanks. Hugs

Eve Roper January 30, 2015 at 2:51 PM Beautiful romantic write and places to be captured in. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve Eileen Manassian January 30, 2015 at 6:57 PM :) Thanks ever so much, Eve. I'm so thrilled that Vienna looked favorably on this piece. I tried to bring a little of the world into it. Thank you for your kind visit and comment.

Justin Bordner January 26, 2015 at 6:58 PM Together, tight in sublime heat we shall meet in the center of the Universe's heart and build a passion no age can defeat...I love it when your passion pounces aggressively and conquers Warrior Princess...you are a fantasy woman indeed! J.A.B. Eileen Manassian January 27, 2015 at 12:30 AM I love to conquer....it gives me exquisite joy to be in control. Yes, that is a very real part of my nature. I thrive on it....Imagination is a lovely thing, is it not? No one can steal a dream or make it any less real, Justin. In many ways, I am a fantasy woman...but my feelings are real. Thanks for visiting. HUGS

Paul Callus January 23, 2015 at 11:45 AM I am tempted to take one of these tours Eileen! I like what's on offer; your role-playing titillates the imagination...and anything to do with dark chocolate suits me fine! Looking forward to see where this is going to place on the winners' list! hugs // paul [ps...used to...?!] Paul Callus January 23, 2015 at 2:41 PM I have already placed it high on the podium, that's why I gave it a top rating! Indeed, imagination and anticipation are the secrets of success! Eileen Manassian January 23, 2015 at 11:49 AM Paul....Paul, where would YOU place it? Please do tell me....I do like role playing. Imagination is a wonderful thing and adds spice and all things nice. To know you're tempted to take this tour....is wonderful news to me!!! Tell me when you're free and so I can do the booking! ;) Paul...honesty is my downfall....you know that....PS

David Meade January 22, 2015 at 5:29 PM Another signature write . . . you amaze me . . . OK, true confession . . . I am into dark chocolate fantasies!! Light and love dear little one! 7 Eileen Manassian January 22, 2015 at 10:59 PM Oh....Nutella has it's charm, but melted chocolate works as well! ;) Thanks for the visit, David. Hugs

Laura Breidenthal January 22, 2015 at 4:06 PM Awesome addition to the contest. You express passion and sensuality like no other! Love your style, and I will be reading more of your recent works. That last stanza is magical. Another gem of yours! You write with so much heart and might. Admiring your light today! Always, Laura Eileen Manassian January 22, 2015 at 11:00 PM Thanks, Laura. Your writes also are full of heart and soul. Is there any other way to write? :) Thanks for the visit, my dear. You've been to several of my writes. I'm honored by the visits and the lovely comments. Hugs

Richard Lamoureux January 22, 2015 at 3:53 PM This is why men love to travel so much! I enjoyed this passionate journey to erotic places! Ohh la la all the way! Eileen Manassian January 22, 2015 at 11:01 PM OH OH OH OH!!!! I got my Oh la la from Mr Lamouruex! :) Thanks, Richard. I do have a fertile....imagination. I love spicing things up. Hubby used to play along...Thanks for the visit. Hugs

Tim Smith January 22, 2015 at 3:50 PM A very beautiful and sensuous love poem Eileen...The perfect valentine...hugs Tim Eileen Manassian January 22, 2015 at 3:52 PM Thanks, Tim. Hope Rose likes it. I read her instructions well....and she wants to be swept off her feet. :) I tried to get a worldly feel to it. That's what she wanted. You've got to know your audience. Thanks for the visit. Hugs