In Ragged Breaths

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G Forms - Grook Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France

“When the curtain drops, should we not applaud” ~ by poet
 
age wrinkles the face of youth
and dulls its eyes~
in no time, Death is at my door
a shadow of a shadow...
my ears pretend not to hear
His approach
gasping in ragged breaths ~
His nails
scraping against old bones
Death drinks my tears

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Date: 10/1/2024 10:11:00 AM
Emile, congratulations on your win in my Grook contest with this beautifully penned poem, love your quote and image, Constance
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Date: 10/1/2024 1:43:00 PM
Thank you so much, Constance; I appreciate the placement and your comments, my friend. Emile.
Date: 9/13/2024 1:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning work in Constance's contest. Way to go. Thank you for sharing your gift with us. Sara K
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/14/2024 7:10:00 AM
Thanks, Sara; I appreciate your comments, my friend. Emile.
Date: 8/22/2024 3:38:00 PM
Nice portrait of a guy I don't want to see around any time soon.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/23/2024 7:50:00 AM
Thanks, David; I appreciate your comments, my friend. Emile.
Date: 8/22/2024 12:11:00 PM
So imaginative and expressive Emile. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 8/23/2024 7:48:00 AM
Thanks, Linda; I appreciate your comments, my friend. Emile.
Date: 8/22/2024 8:33:00 AM
Congrats, Emile! Emotive and rich in imagery!
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Date: 8/22/2024 10:39:00 AM
Thanks, Kim; I appreciate your comments, my friend. Emile.
Date: 8/22/2024 4:30:00 AM
engraved words, such a beautiful quote, Fav. Congratulations on your win dear poet.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/22/2024 7:36:00 AM
Thanks, Thriveni ; I appreciate your comments, my friend. Emile.
Date: 8/17/2024 12:44:00 PM
Wow. This is fantastic, Emile. A fave for me. Thanks for my placement in your last contest too
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Date: 8/17/2024 1:15:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea; I'm glad you like it, my friend. Emile.
Date: 8/10/2024 2:23:00 AM
This is such an engaging write, Emile. Far beyond the scope of most who call themselves a poet.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/10/2024 6:21:00 AM
Thanks, Lin; I appreciate your comments; you have made my day, my friend. Emile.
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