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In Quiet Breaths He Sings Your Name

~ If on this eve of glistened skies when crystal snowflakes fall Amidst the hush of tempered sighs where heartbeat whispers call Your mind is lost another place as moonbeams dance above In wishes that you long to trace of visions filled with love Remember as the evening nears and stars reflect your smile Within the shimmered light appears in winter’s mystic style Another who does feel the same beyond horizons clear In quiet breaths he sings your name in hopes that you will hear One who longs you by his side as nighttime breezes sift In harmonies sent to confide, melodic thoughts adrift So listen as these flurries flow and in your heart believe There is a man who sings of you this snowflake glistened eve ~

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Indiana Shaw

Date: 12/21/2019 4:21:00 PM

You could make eating cornflakes in the morning romantic as at the kitchen sink looking out on a beautiful day Chris, sings . . . : )

Chris Green
Date: 12/23/2019 8:21:00 AM

Thank you so much. That is funny and I appreciate you thinking so. Your comment has brought a smile to me this morning

Hello There

Date: 12/9/2019 4:27:00 PM

The sweetest song you have shared with us, my friend. This is one of my favorites of yours and will be saved. Feels like it was written with love and really touches the heart..

Chris Green
Date: 12/9/2019 5:02:00 PM

I am thrilled you liked this one my friend. It was inspired by something a dear friend said to me, I am happy it touched your heart. I appreciate your kindness, your nice comments are always a gift to me

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/9/2019 2:44:00 PM

Such a comforting message in a snowfall/snowstorm --- where distance again becomes a real barrier, even in today's hyper-connected world. Bravo, Chris: Beautifully perceived and conceived--not to mention lovely written! Season's Joy! Cheers, Gershon

Chris Green
Date: 12/9/2019 4:59:00 PM

Thanks again GW for always being so kind and supportive of my work. I truly do appreciate you my friend.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/8/2019 2:52:00 PM

this is so precious. like two people who think of each other , looking at the same moon each night. Very romantic.

Chris Green
Date: 12/9/2019 9:41:00 AM

Thank you Andrea so very much

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 12/7/2019 2:26:00 PM

Sounds like my Cinderella's slipper poem - wow Chris - all the best my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jenny

Chris Green
Date: 12/9/2019 9:41:00 AM

Thanks so very much Jennifer. I loved your poem, happy this one touched you in the same way.

Lin Lane

Date: 12/7/2019 8:21:00 AM

These are the thoughts that warm a heart. "Amidst the hush of tempered sighs/where heartbeat whispers call" Ah, I remember those. Excellently expressed is your penchant for creating wistful romance. So well written, Chris.

Chris Green
Date: 12/9/2019 9:40:00 AM

Thanks so very much Lin for your kind comment on my poem. I appreciate you my friend.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/7/2019 4:38:00 AM

Hanging on every beautiful word!

Chris Green
Date: 12/9/2019 9:40:00 AM

Thank you my friend.

Ann Foster

Date: 12/6/2019 10:28:00 PM

That was nearly musical... I could hear soft harps... in the back ground. Excellent write my friend. You are such a romantic. Ann

Chris Green
Date: 12/9/2019 9:40:00 AM

Thank you Ann for your kindness

Na Na

Date: 12/6/2019 8:46:00 PM

Bravo Chris. Your pen is on fire. dont ever lose that spark. Thanks for sharing this

Chris Green
Date: 12/9/2019 9:39:00 AM

Thanks so very much Greg.

Line Gauthier

Date: 12/6/2019 7:14:00 PM

Awesome melodic poem, Chris.

Chris Green
Date: 12/9/2019 9:39:00 AM

Thank you so very much Line.

John Hamilton

Date: 12/6/2019 6:40:00 PM

Wow another beauty Chris, you have the gift, and it's a gift that keeps giving, and we are the blessed recipients!

Chris Green
Date: 12/9/2019 9:39:00 AM

Thank you my friend. Happy you liked this one

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/6/2019 6:31:00 PM

This is beautifully written Chris and it is so meaningful and special. A favorite for me! I hope you have a great weekend! :)

Chris Green
Date: 12/9/2019 9:29:00 AM

Thank you Heidi for your nice words and the fave. I appreciate it.

Sandra Adams

Date: 12/6/2019 6:19:00 PM

sigh....wow...i am at a loss for words, this is just so romantic and beautiful Chris.. you are the a master at these writes and i feel honored to call you friend as i read your breathtaking verses... i hope you have a wonderful weekend! hugs

Chris Green
Date: 12/9/2019 9:29:00 AM

Thank you my friend for every kindness you show me. You are always so nice to me. I am thrilled you liked this one so much.