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In Quiet Breaths He Sings Your Name

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If on this eve of glistened skies
when crystal snowflakes fall
Amidst the hush of tempered sighs
where heartbeat whispers call

Your mind is lost another place
as moonbeams dance above
In wishes that you long to trace
of visions filled with love

Remember as the evening nears
and stars reflect your smile
Within the shimmered light appears
in winter’s mystic style

Another who does feel the same
beyond horizons clear
In quiet breaths he sings your name
in hopes that you will hear

One who longs you by his side
as nighttime breezes sift
In harmonies sent to confide,
melodic thoughts adrift

So listen as these flurries flow
and in your heart believe
There is a man who sings of you
this snowflake glistened eve 

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Copyright © Chris Green | Year Posted 2019

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Indiana Shaw Date: 12/21/2019 4:21:00 PM You could make eating cornflakes in the morning romantic as at the kitchen sink looking out on a beautiful day Chris, sings . . . : ) Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 12/23/2019 8:21:00 AM Thank you so much. That is funny and I appreciate you thinking so. Your comment has brought a smile to me this morning

Hello There Date: 12/9/2019 4:27:00 PM The sweetest song you have shared with us, my friend. This is one of my favorites of yours and will be saved. Feels like it was written with love and really touches the heart.. Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 12/9/2019 5:02:00 PM I am thrilled you liked this one my friend. It was inspired by something a dear friend said to me, I am happy it touched your heart. I appreciate your kindness, your nice comments are always a gift to me

Gershon Wolf Date: 12/9/2019 2:44:00 PM Such a comforting message in a snowfall/snowstorm --- where distance again becomes a real barrier, even in today's hyper-connected world. Bravo, Chris: Beautifully perceived and conceived--not to mention lovely written! Season's Joy! Cheers, Gershon Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 12/9/2019 4:59:00 PM Thanks again GW for always being so kind and supportive of my work. I truly do appreciate you my friend.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/8/2019 2:52:00 PM this is so precious. like two people who think of each other , looking at the same moon each night. Very romantic. Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 12/9/2019 9:41:00 AM Thank you Andrea so very much

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 12/7/2019 2:26:00 PM Sounds like my Cinderella's slipper poem - wow Chris - all the best my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jenny Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 12/9/2019 9:41:00 AM Thanks so very much Jennifer. I loved your poem, happy this one touched you in the same way.

Lin Lane Date: 12/7/2019 8:21:00 AM These are the thoughts that warm a heart. "Amidst the hush of tempered sighs/where heartbeat whispers call" Ah, I remember those. Excellently expressed is your penchant for creating wistful romance. So well written, Chris. Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 12/9/2019 9:40:00 AM Thanks so very much Lin for your kind comment on my poem. I appreciate you my friend.

Kim Rodrigues Date: 12/7/2019 4:38:00 AM Hanging on every beautiful word! Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 12/9/2019 9:40:00 AM Thank you my friend.

Ann Foster Date: 12/6/2019 10:28:00 PM That was nearly musical... I could hear soft harps... in the back ground. Excellent write my friend. You are such a romantic. Ann Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 12/9/2019 9:40:00 AM Thank you Ann for your kindness

Na Na Date: 12/6/2019 8:46:00 PM Bravo Chris. Your pen is on fire. dont ever lose that spark. Thanks for sharing this Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 12/9/2019 9:39:00 AM Thanks so very much Greg.

Line Gauthier Date: 12/6/2019 7:14:00 PM Awesome melodic poem, Chris. Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 12/9/2019 9:39:00 AM Thank you so very much Line.

John Hamilton Date: 12/6/2019 6:40:00 PM Wow another beauty Chris, you have the gift, and it's a gift that keeps giving, and we are the blessed recipients! Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 12/9/2019 9:39:00 AM Thank you my friend. Happy you liked this one

Heidi Sands Date: 12/6/2019 6:31:00 PM This is beautifully written Chris and it is so meaningful and special. A favorite for me! I hope you have a great weekend! :) Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 12/9/2019 9:29:00 AM Thank you Heidi for your nice words and the fave. I appreciate it.

Sandra Adams Date: 12/6/2019 6:19:00 PM sigh....wow...i am at a loss for words, this is just so romantic and beautiful Chris.. you are the a master at these writes and i feel honored to call you friend as i read your breathtaking verses... i hope you have a wonderful weekend! hugs Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 12/9/2019 9:29:00 AM Thank you my friend for every kindness you show me. You are always so nice to me. I am thrilled you liked this one so much.