Chris Green Poet Rhyme

In Quiet Breaths He Sings Your Name

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If on this eve of glistened skies
when crystal snowflakes fall
Amidst the hush of tempered sighs
where heartbeat whispers call

Your mind is lost another place
as moonbeams dance above
In wishes that you long to trace
of visions filled with love

Remember as the evening nears
and stars reflect your smile
Within the shimmered light appears
in winter’s mystic style

Another who does feel the same
beyond horizons clear
In quiet breaths he sings your name
in hopes that you will hear

One who longs you by his side
as nighttime breezes sift
In harmonies sent to confide,
melodic thoughts adrift

So listen as these flurries flow
and in your heart believe
There is a man who sings of you
this snowflake glistened eve 

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Indiana Shaw December 21, 2019 at 4:21 PM You could make eating cornflakes in the morning romantic as at the kitchen sink looking out on a beautiful day Chris, sings . . . : ) Chris Green December 23, 2019 at 8:21 AM Thank you so much. That is funny and I appreciate you thinking so. Your comment has brought a smile to me this morning

Hello There December 9, 2019 at 4:27 PM The sweetest song you have shared with us, my friend. This is one of my favorites of yours and will be saved. Feels like it was written with love and really touches the heart.. Chris Green December 9, 2019 at 5:02 PM I am thrilled you liked this one my friend. It was inspired by something a dear friend said to me, I am happy it touched your heart. I appreciate your kindness, your nice comments are always a gift to me

Gershon Wolf December 9, 2019 at 2:44 PM Such a comforting message in a snowfall/snowstorm --- where distance again becomes a real barrier, even in today's hyper-connected world. Bravo, Chris: Beautifully perceived and conceived--not to mention lovely written! Season's Joy! Cheers, Gershon Chris Green December 9, 2019 at 4:59 PM Thanks again GW for always being so kind and supportive of my work. I truly do appreciate you my friend.

Andrea Dietrich December 8, 2019 at 2:52 PM this is so precious. like two people who think of each other , looking at the same moon each night. Very romantic. Chris Green December 9, 2019 at 9:41 AM Thank you Andrea so very much

Jennifer Proxenos December 7, 2019 at 2:26 PM Sounds like my Cinderella's slipper poem - wow Chris - all the best my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jenny Chris Green December 9, 2019 at 9:41 AM Thanks so very much Jennifer. I loved your poem, happy this one touched you in the same way.

Lin Lane December 7, 2019 at 8:21 AM These are the thoughts that warm a heart. "Amidst the hush of tempered sighs/where heartbeat whispers call" Ah, I remember those. Excellently expressed is your penchant for creating wistful romance. So well written, Chris. Chris Green December 9, 2019 at 9:40 AM Thanks so very much Lin for your kind comment on my poem. I appreciate you my friend.

Kim Rodrigues December 7, 2019 at 4:38 AM Hanging on every beautiful word! Chris Green December 9, 2019 at 9:40 AM Thank you my friend.

Ann Foster December 6, 2019 at 10:28 PM That was nearly musical... I could hear soft harps... in the back ground. Excellent write my friend. You are such a romantic. Ann Chris Green December 9, 2019 at 9:40 AM Thank you Ann for your kindness

Na Na December 6, 2019 at 8:46 PM Bravo Chris. Your pen is on fire. dont ever lose that spark. Thanks for sharing this Chris Green December 9, 2019 at 9:39 AM Thanks so very much Greg.

Line Gauthier December 6, 2019 at 7:14 PM Awesome melodic poem, Chris. Chris Green December 9, 2019 at 9:39 AM Thank you so very much Line.

John Hamilton December 6, 2019 at 6:40 PM Wow another beauty Chris, you have the gift, and it's a gift that keeps giving, and we are the blessed recipients! Chris Green December 9, 2019 at 9:39 AM Thank you my friend. Happy you liked this one

Heidi Sands December 6, 2019 at 6:31 PM This is beautifully written Chris and it is so meaningful and special. A favorite for me! I hope you have a great weekend! :) Chris Green December 9, 2019 at 9:29 AM Thank you Heidi for your nice words and the fave. I appreciate it.

Sandra Adams December 6, 2019 at 6:19 PM sigh....wow...i am at a loss for words, this is just so romantic and beautiful Chris.. you are the a master at these writes and i feel honored to call you friend as i read your breathtaking verses... i hope you have a wonderful weekend! hugs Chris Green December 9, 2019 at 9:29 AM Thank you my friend for every kindness you show me. You are always so nice to me. I am thrilled you liked this one so much.