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Feb.19.2025
Write a New Etheree Poetry Contest
Sponsor. Tania Kitchin

 

In Pursuit of Joy

joy in life, hard to find. so tough to keep. it's always sought for, it’s a song that resounds, a blessing that wraps the soul, a mirage that eludes the mind, a fleeting shadow, never concrete, it's like a treasure secretly hidden. everyone wants to experience joy. it comes when heart is hopeful and strong. it flits on the smiles of cute babes. reach out your heart to own it. it is a state of mind. strive hard to have it. can access it, with a heart, full of, love.
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Kendrick Avatar
March 4, 2025 at 7:03 AM
Dropping by once again this time to say congratulations on your winning work. So nice to see it in the winners' list. Way to go. Sara K
Kitchin Avatar
March 2, 2025 at 5:37 AM
Valsa, a beautiful poem and message, congratulations on your first place win.
George Avatar
March 2, 2025 at 9:36 PM
Thanks a lot dear Tania for your contest and the high placement you have given for my poem.
Dietrich Avatar
February 24, 2025 at 1:24 PM
Oh sorry about that. You are right. Tania's is not judged yet. For some reason, I thought I saw it with a win somewhere. Must be my imagination
Dietrich Avatar
February 23, 2025 at 10:56 AM
Congrats in Inks contest. She gives us such inspiring prompts.
George Avatar
February 23, 2025 at 7:20 PM
Andrea, please know that the contest is not judged and it is not Ink's contest, but Tania's.
Snow Avatar
February 20, 2025 at 9:48 PM
Hey, I'm grateful that u enjoyed my ABC poem. I enjoyed reading ur Etheree as well. I love those lyrics and the beautiful message. Bless up
Empress Avatar
February 20, 2025 at 5:52 AM
Dear sweet valsa, yours is heart full of love, and it is evident through your poetry and comments too, and yes these words are wise and true and so very profound! Impressive how youv created such a beautiful shape in your etheree too! So stunning and what youv conveyed there is also very impactful! One must always strive and try, amidst the obstacles we face everyday, joy is a feeling we find in simple things in life, you are right, too here what youv stated. We find joy in immaterial things, by counting blessings too! Absolute pleasure reading this gem! A fave it is for me! I love etherees and the theme of this is soulful! Sending you light today and always
Dietrich Avatar
February 19, 2025 at 1:05 PM
Yes, I think it's what we all want most in our lives, and love is a good note to finish this on!
Buhagiar Avatar
February 19, 2025 at 10:40 AM
Joy can be elusive. We must trust in God. Blessings.
Narain Avatar
February 19, 2025 at 9:01 AM
Nice poem. Beautifully penned.
M  Avatar
February 19, 2025 at 8:19 AM
Very beautiful Valsa! Debx
Kendrick Avatar
February 19, 2025 at 7:36 AM
Reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. Happiness is fleeting but Joy that comes from above is always there. Thanks for the nice work. Sara K
DiMino Avatar
February 19, 2025 at 4:44 AM
"joy comes when heart is hopeful and strong. it flits on the smiles of cute babes." Now, how precious is that! Love it! Well written.
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