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In Praise of God-Eternal Embrace

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When horizons are lost and dim, Standing in solace with a hymn; My eyes sunken within a hole, Eternal love, embrace my soul. Of tired tears where the pain remains, Looking for you to break the chains; Resurrecting my body whole, Eternal love, embrace my soul. When love has gone and darkness rules, Thus phantom nights agape the fools; Your infinite smile does console, Eternal love, embrace my soul. When the mask of death hovers near, I see thy Angels reappear; In this moment we do extol, Eternal love, embrace my soul. In the end your love conquers all, Amidst heavens realms you enthrall; Thus with thy arms you take control, Eternal love, embrace my soul. (No Quatrain Limit) 8 Syllables per line Nov.24.2019 IN PRAISE OF GOD Poetry Sponsored by: Kim Rodrigues Placed 4'th...Thank You

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Date: 1/18/2020 9:25:00 AM
I enjoyed especially the last verse and the refrain! Congratulations on your placement! Hugs...Kim
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Date: 12/4/2019 9:06:00 AM
SO beautiful and deeply spiritual, WW! Janice
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Date: 12/3/2019 2:32:00 PM
Great poem of praise WW..best wishes
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Date: 11/29/2019 8:37:00 AM
This should bu sung by a church choir ^WW^ - great verses ending with the repeated refrain , Wow what wonderful praise to God! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 11/27/2019 11:16:00 PM
Love all of this, but the main refrain is amazing! Absolutely beautiful, ^WW^ :)
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Date: 11/27/2019 8:12:00 AM
Divine poetry that uplifts the soul dearest, WW! Superbly written!
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Date: 11/26/2019 12:22:00 PM
This isn't to bad I will give you a 1st place just because we are brothers, lol THIS IS SOOOOO GOOD W.W. Can I steal it? LOL ^LW^ over and out!
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Date: 11/26/2019 7:38:00 AM
Simply gorgeous faith affirmation in prose, WW!! Have to try my pen hand in Kyrielle ... as such, yours excel, in as much as night cedes to day. Love and best wishes for the holiday season.
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Date: 11/26/2019 4:24:00 AM
This is proof that you are truly a Winged Warrior. Excellent writing WW, I would write one of these but I wouldn't want to take your high place away (lol) Great stuff brother! ~CM
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Date: 11/25/2019 4:35:00 PM
This is stunning writing WW, an evidence of strong faith and hope, perfect rhyming. I love the form with it's repeating refrain, this ones the one to beat, will shine high in the contest!
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Date: 11/25/2019 12:34:00 AM
This is truly in praise of God. "In this moment we do extol, Eternal love, embrace my soul." Wow!
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Date: 11/24/2019 9:49:00 PM
Well done W.W. I just did my 1st one with this poem. I hope I did everything correctly. Looks like you breezed right through it. Best of luck in the contest. Thanks for sharing
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Date: 11/24/2019 8:13:00 PM
WOW! W.W. I love that voice fix me up! You my brother stinker you blew me out of the water with this one, no way I have a chance to even come in 10th place!! Awesome Job Big brother well done!!
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Date: 11/24/2019 8:42:00 PM
...and if you want, I'll drop out of the contest-so you can win :o)
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Date: 11/24/2019 8:40:00 PM
Thanks, little wing...that's virtual Emma...you'll need a virtual love note to entice her lol...then you'll be in virtual heaven lol...later little dude...Big wing out :o)

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