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In Praise of Barge Workers

Wind sweeps down the side of the mountain Crosses tracks and flings itself across the river, First slapping against the sides of the tugboats Causing the deckhands to shiver and curse As they check the lashing between the barges, Several days before they reach the sun And longer still before arriving at the delta, In the meantime, they work as fast as they can with pea coats fastened against oncoming blasts Of bitter chill, and careful avoiding icy patches On the walkways of the behemoths they tame Young men romanticize working on the river, Unaware of the dangers, seems an easy job. They do not know of bodies mangled, crushed Chain unhitched, a single misstep, a sudden jerk When least expected, pay beneficiaries for a life.
written December 9, 2021

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Date: 12/10/2021 2:10:00 PM
Great tribute to the barge workers Milton, we always see the glamorous side of things not realising the dangers that often come with that occupation.. Tom
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 12/10/2021 2:15:00 PM
That is so true, Tom. At one time I wanted to work on a barge. I thought it was romantic! Then, I learned about the dangers.
Date: 12/10/2021 9:33:00 AM
A wonderful tribute to workers at a job I never realized was so dangerous. Great poem, Milton!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 12/10/2021 9:49:00 AM
Thank you, Ilene, for your thoughtful comment on my poem.
Date: 12/10/2021 5:40:00 AM
So many job, or trades, have hidden dangers few are aware of. Nicely written "thumbs up" for the barge workers
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 12/10/2021 8:51:00 AM
Thank you for your thoughtful comment, John. I appreciate your read and your thoughts.

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