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In Perfect C

Beneath the sea
swirls the untouched
     of me
slip sliding
    deeply on silent green winds
skidding on bottom storms
blind
    sweetest bubble notes of Being
rise to burst on the surface
in symphony    ~
        the music
                   of
           your
             rainbow
                 colours.
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Thank you Mark Hansen for encouraging me to write about my love of the sea to 
get me off the bubble   ; )

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006




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Date: 8/31/2008 8:58:00 PM
Superb imagery, floating with you on this one.
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