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In Passing Moments

No one witnessed the tiny 
speck of dawn, born
in very moment that 
a giant star had died
and sent this bit of 
iron hurtling through the
velvet deep of space, 
wandering there in solitary 
wonder for over 
ten thousand million years. 

But then one day, 
it found itself on perfect course, 
toward a little yellow sun, 
its light piercing and intense. 
But a tiny blue white dot 
got in its way, and in the air
of that new world, 
it vaporized and then departed, 
shouting with a dazzling streak, 
its journey now complete. 

“It’s called a shooting star,” 
the father told his kids.
“Or some know them best as
meteors. I’m sure that 
if you stay outside, you’ll see
another just as nice since there’s 
a shower of them tonight.”
“Naw, we’re playing 
video games downstairs, 
and anyway, I’m winning.”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 8/24/2019 2:50:00 AM
Wow I like writing and reading poems with science infused so I admire this brilliant intellectual muse. The kids miss a lot of nature these days. We in our childhood spent more time outdoors in trees. Kudos for this stellar poem.
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Date: 8/21/2019 12:16:00 AM
Psh... 21st Century kids ! Great write, Mark.
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