'in Our Time'

Like a baby taking his first steps
Those tentative ones 

You walked in, delved into depths 
Unaware of the hurt, the hidden scars
Placing your heart on the line,
With no fear, what joy or sadness lay ahead

My wings, 
The forgetful ones, the ones who forgot
What it felt like to fly, you nurtured them, 
Like liniment
In your own time, never rushed
As if it was your mission in life
To ease the pain, deep within

With love,
Moments of not saying a word,
Just being there, 
Listening 
Wiping the tears away, if they would trickle down
Like liniment
In your own time, never rushed
As if it was your mission in life
To ease the pain, deep within

No trepidation 
Those forgetful wings
They soar, with your love
Like liniment
We did it in our own time…  

Contest: For The Sake Of Free Verse
4th Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Arnott Avatar
March 2, 2011 at 10:56 AM
enjoyed very much :)
Brown Avatar
February 25, 2011 at 11:02 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Wilma,in Chris D. Aechtner's contest "For The Sake Of Free Verse". Love, Carol
Freeman Avatar
February 22, 2011 at 8:36 AM
Good to see you near the top Wilma. Congratulations on your inspiring Free verse and it honored fourth place. Agape, Moses
George   Avatar
February 20, 2011 at 6:19 PM
Absolutely gorgeous! Many congrat's on your well deserved win. wilma. Lainie
Mehta Avatar
February 20, 2011 at 4:27 PM
Congratulations on this win in the contest of Chris, Wilma
Sweetheart Avatar
February 20, 2011 at 6:55 AM
Congrats Wilma on your wonderful success in the free verse contest with this magnificent entry luv.. enjoy another chart topping win my friend...
Mannan Avatar
February 20, 2011 at 3:03 AM
Beautiful love Wilma. many congrats for this win
Pettit Avatar
February 20, 2011 at 1:19 AM
Wilma, congratulations on winning in Chris's contest with this entry.
K. Avatar
February 19, 2011 at 10:37 PM
What a very heartfelt write, missy-- I really like how you used wings here and the message that you give-- indeed they would soar, but in their own time, and with that love-- Super congrats missy :)!! hugs to you :)
Sweetheart Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 4:49 PM
Exquisite expressions in this lovely free verse Wilma.. delicate and emotional write.. good luck if for the new free verse contest.. lovely flow and flare to these lines luv..
Falotico Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 1:48 PM
I am so happy when I read these words.. you have taken a piece of my heart with this one... the old phrase "been there done that" is so true.. thank you for reminding me of why Im still here..with love Michel
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