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'in Our Time'

Like a baby taking his first steps Those tentative ones You walked in, delved into depths Unaware of the hurt, the hidden scars Placing your heart on the line, With no fear, what joy or sadness lay ahead My wings, The forgetful ones, the ones who forgot What it felt like to fly, you nurtured them, Like liniment In your own time, never rushed As if it was your mission in life To ease the pain, deep within With love, Moments of not saying a word, Just being there, Listening Wiping the tears away, if they would trickle down Like liniment In your own time, never rushed As if it was your mission in life To ease the pain, deep within No trepidation Those forgetful wings They soar, with your love Like liniment We did it in our own time… Contest: For The Sake Of Free Verse 4th Place

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Date: 3/2/2011 10:56:00 AM
enjoyed very much :)
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Date: 2/25/2011 11:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Wilma,in Chris D. Aechtner's contest "For The Sake Of Free Verse". Love, Carol
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Date: 2/22/2011 8:36:00 AM
Good to see you near the top Wilma. Congratulations on your inspiring Free verse and it honored fourth place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/20/2011 6:19:00 PM
Absolutely gorgeous! Many congrat's on your well deserved win. wilma. Lainie
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Date: 2/20/2011 4:27:00 PM
Congratulations on this win in the contest of Chris, Wilma
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Date: 2/20/2011 6:55:00 AM
Congrats Wilma on your wonderful success in the free verse contest with this magnificent entry luv.. enjoy another chart topping win my friend...
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Date: 2/20/2011 3:03:00 AM
Beautiful love Wilma. many congrats for this win
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Date: 2/20/2011 1:19:00 AM
Wilma, congratulations on winning in Chris's contest with this entry.
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Date: 2/19/2011 10:37:00 PM
What a very heartfelt write, missy-- I really like how you used wings here and the message that you give-- indeed they would soar, but in their own time, and with that love-- Super congrats missy :)!! hugs to you :)
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Date: 2/18/2011 4:49:00 PM
Exquisite expressions in this lovely free verse Wilma.. delicate and emotional write.. good luck if for the new free verse contest.. lovely flow and flare to these lines luv..
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Date: 2/18/2011 1:48:00 PM
I am so happy when I read these words.. you have taken a piece of my heart with this one... the old phrase "been there done that" is so true.. thank you for reminding me of why Im still here..with love Michel
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