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In Our Feelings

If you could have only felt what I feel And I could have read into yours But these feelings that we get, These feelings that make us and break us, Only form our souls' essence. To live in ours' and to live in others', Isn't that glorious? So let our eyes not deceive by sight, Let our minds not judge A fellow's feelings inside. If you can't feel into me And I can't feel into you, Let me just fever your feelings for you, Fever those feelings And revel together with these feelings inside.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 10/13/2017 6:36:00 AM
If you like to choose the correct form for your poem? It is Free Verse :) I like your poem, the last three lines especially appeal to me. Welcome to PoetrySoup
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Antariksha Rajkumari
Date: 10/13/2017 11:27:00 AM
Thank you so much !! It means a lot to me that you could connect with these lines.And especially,for correcting me in the form of my poem. With lots of love- Antariksha
Date: 10/12/2017 6:25:00 AM
Good morning Antariksha...Loved your poem... Would be nice to read some more...Have a lovely day
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Antariksha Rajkumari
Date: 10/12/2017 12:16:00 PM
This is my first poem. Thank you so much for your kind appreciation.It boosted me up. May you have a lovelier day ahead:)

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