In Orbit

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that feeling of sheer warmth engendered by your loving embrace traps me in orbit. It catapults me to the moon, my sweet! Your raging fire of passion engulfs me Submitted for... Any Short Poem Poetry Contest (Winner: 1st Place) Sponsored by Brian Strand Date: 12/01/2020 Date written: 11/22/2020

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Juliet Ligon

Date: 12/12/2020 9:57:00 PM

Beautifully written, makes me long for an embrace.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/13/2020 3:59:00 AM

Thank you so much, Juliet:-) Happy holidays!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/9/2020 9:37:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Your pen was working over time. A wonderful picture to go with your wonderful write. Enjoy your win with blessings.................

Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/9/2020 11:34:00 AM

Thank you, Paula:-) I appreciate the congrats and wonderful feedback! Blessings to you, too.{Hugs}

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/8/2020 7:55:00 PM

Potent and passionate, Edward. Congratulations for your excellent win in Brian's contest with this romantic poem.. ~Susan

Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/8/2020 9:54:00 PM

Thank you very much, Susan:-) Your feedback means a lot to me!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 12/7/2020 12:08:00 PM

Kudos and congratulations Edward. Your wonderful choice of words sends us in an "orbit" of smiles and happiness reading this gem! All the best my friend!

Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/7/2020 4:22:00 PM

Thank you very much indeed, Sam:-) I appreciate the wonderful feedback and congrats!