Edward Ibeh Poet Tetractys

Notes About The Poem

In Orbit

that
feeling
of sheer warmth
engendered by
your loving embrace traps me in orbit.
It catapults me to the moon, my sweet!
Your raging fire
of passion
engulfs
me


Submitted for...
Any Short Poem Poetry Contest (Winner: 1st Place)
Sponsored by Brian Strand 
Date: 12/01/2020

Date written: 11/22/2020

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Juliet Ligon December 12, 2020 at 9:57 PM Beautifully written, makes me long for an embrace. Edward Ibeh December 13, 2020 at 3:59 AM Thank you so much, Juliet:-) Happy holidays!

Paula Goldsmith December 9, 2020 at 9:37 AM Congratulations on your win. Your pen was working over time. A wonderful picture to go with your wonderful write. Enjoy your win with blessings................. Edward Ibeh December 9, 2020 at 11:34 AM Thank you, Paula:-) I appreciate the congrats and wonderful feedback! Blessings to you, too.{Hugs}

Susan Ashley December 8, 2020 at 7:55 PM Potent and passionate, Edward. Congratulations for your excellent win in Brian's contest with this romantic poem.. ~Susan Edward Ibeh December 8, 2020 at 9:54 PM Thank you very much, Susan:-) Your feedback means a lot to me!

Sam Kauffman December 7, 2020 at 12:08 PM Kudos and congratulations Edward. Your wonderful choice of words sends us in an "orbit" of smiles and happiness reading this gem! All the best my friend! Edward Ibeh December 7, 2020 at 4:22 PM Thank you very much indeed, Sam:-) I appreciate the wonderful feedback and congrats!

Carol Mitra December 7, 2020 at 4:41 AM Such a awesome write....Great piece Edward and Congrats :) Edward Ibeh December 7, 2020 at 10:31 AM Thank you very much, Carol:-)

Constance La France November 22, 2020 at 9:49 PM Edward, you have penned a beautiful romnatic Tetractys _Constance Edward Ibeh November 23, 2020 at 10:32 AM Thank you, Constance:-)

Kim Rodrigues November 22, 2020 at 6:32 PM Well done in form and shape! Love it! Edward Ibeh November 23, 2020 at 10:31 AM Thank you, Kim:-)