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In Ones Comfort Zone

the only place one size fits all ~ is the main aisle of the shopping mall well proportioned heavy or small ~ no pain in the neck if nine feet tall

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Christopher Flaherty

Date: 9/1/2023 3:36:00 PM

Unless of course you fail to mind and end up bumping ones head Some fine pondering and thought provoking connotations in your recent catalogue of work David Sir

Christopher Flaherty
Date: 9/6/2023 12:03:00 PM

David Sir I can hit my head on a Bumpy Castle And my official address is No 1 House of the Eternally Damned Hell Street 666

David Kavanagh
Date: 9/1/2023 3:47:00 PM

The ceiling is about 60 feet high in the main aisle of my local shopping mall, but yeah I could fall off an escalator and bang my head, damn you Flaherty your right, nowhere is safe lol, cheers David

Lin Lane

Date: 8/26/2023 7:51:00 AM

Rhyming Monoku. You’re perfecting the form. I thought of a good one on the plane yesterday but forgot it before I could write it down.

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/26/2023 8:27:00 AM

Im just trying to hone up a blunt muse Lin, so rhyming tankas or Monokus usually do the job, I’ve always found it difficult to write poems on planes for some reason, the lack of leg room doesn’t help either, have a great holiday cheers David

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/26/2023 3:57:00 AM

My favourite pastime, shopping, (Joking) Shopping on line is the way forward now. A lady by me has tesco deliver the weeks groceries, there's no need to leave the house or stick your neck out lol. Enjoy your weekend David. Tom

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/26/2023 5:41:00 AM

Heya Tom I’m fine in the main concourse on the mall, and enjoy having a coffee at the kiosks is great, but one could easily lose their head in some of the shops, no thanks, I’m an onliner myself lol, have a good one, cheers David

I Am Anaya

Date: 8/25/2023 7:16:00 PM

Oh, plenty of neck pain going around, nothing a guillotine won't fix! nyuck nyuck

I Am Anaya
Date: 8/26/2023 6:29:00 PM

Ignorance can be bliss! And "Silence is Golden"...I hope I'm not a pain, David, I really enjoy your poetry! ;#

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/26/2023 1:02:00 AM

Heya Anaya, (If You Can Keep Your Head When Everybody Round You Is Losing His, Then It Is Very Probable That You Don’t Understand the Situation) Lol, cheers David

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/25/2023 5:41:00 PM

David, your Monoku effectively conveys that the shopping mall's main aisle is the only global size. It points out that nine-foot-tall people of any size, including heavyset ones, are comfy. Thus, those under this height restriction may want to avoid shopping.

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/26/2023 1:09:00 AM

Indeed Lasaad, yes that would mainly apply to Giraffes and elephants, lol, although the odd stampede has been known to take place, I’m gonna shop on line from now on, cheers David

Di11y Da11y

Date: 8/25/2023 2:00:00 PM

Haha I just replied to you mentioning a pain in the neck, maybe I'm psychic...

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/25/2023 2:27:00 PM

We’d like to think so Dilly, but its still pretty early the other side of the pond, clubbing sounds good though!

Di11y Da11y
Date: 8/25/2023 2:17:00 PM

Everyone disappears on Fridays on PS - presumably clubbing :D

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/25/2023 2:11:00 PM

You certainly are I’ve just seen your reply, two completely unrelated posts, yet a weird connection in the comments, the soup seems very quiet tonight, perhaps the neck pain is going around lol, cheers David