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In Need of Redemption

Yes, I know I must go to confession. But, oh my, it has been over a year! So, what if I freeze during the session? I’m worried Father Joe might laugh and sneer. Could I not say I had only one drink? Then next time, I could say I told a lie? Yeah, but that would surely make my ship sink. Should God not know that really, I do try? Maybe, I ask all the wrong questions, right? I should just halt one punctuation mark, Since no one can hear me this lonely night. Oh Lord, I’m so cold and scared in the dark. Okay, I admit, I’m a drunk and thief. Forgive me so I can turn a new leaf.

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Date: 10/12/2023 7:31:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your redemption-thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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