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December-25-2024
Ten Lines from Ten Poems Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Silent One

 

It’s a beautiful day in May. Morning light comes covered in swirling mist Piles of silver clouds move above A cool zephyr blows from the South Verdant leaves flutter in sweet murmurs Birds tweet on treetops singing carols of love Bees hum a resonant orchestral murmur How these common scenes fill me with delight! A peace fills me as never before. It's a brief interlude from all angry strife!
My poems from which each line is taken: 1. A Day in May 2. Nature in Autumn 3. The Unrolling Expanse 4. A Lovely October Morn 5. A Spring Sonata 6. Spring Arrives 7. Gemini Garden- Silent One 8. What Fascinates Me 9. By the Seaside 10. A Silent Night, a Holy Night

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Date: 12/31/2024 11:08:00 AM
I think this poem was so well composed. If he has done a standard contest, I am not sure it would have been on the winner list
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Date: 12/27/2024 9:08:00 AM
A lovely arrangement of lines to produce a cohesive poem all on its own. Good luck in the contest, Valsa
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Date: 12/27/2024 9:08:00 AM
Ten lines from ten poems, all make a coherent whole. So well done, dear Valsa. best for a win. Wishing you a happy and healthy 2025.
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Date: 12/26/2024 1:32:00 AM
One of those takes that left me in awe! Wow! Youv nailed it sweet valsa! This feels like a poem so well written for the contest, your lines flow so well together and with such beautiful wordplay and imagery that truly stands out! I especially love the lines “ Piles of silver clouds move above A cool zephyr blows from the South Verdant leaves flutter in sweet murmurs “ gosh reading your poem makes me feel like mine isnt good enough! This deserves also a big FAVE! Love this! Hope holidays treat you well . Sending you light today and always
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Date: 12/25/2024 6:21:00 AM
Lovely write! So much to be grateful for, so much beauty surrounding most of us at all times, and yet we focus more on the frailties. I know, some disappointments are seemingly impossible to overcome. Some people know little peace and happiness, tortured, tormented daily. Lots I will question if I make it to heaven.
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Date: 12/25/2024 3:34:00 AM
Such weather description for May Valsa based on your previous poems. Great write for the Contest. It seems a bit difficult but you have done it so well my Dear... Merry Christmas...
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