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I close my eyes and soon drift to another world, and I find myself in a lush garden; I hear ocean waves crashing on a shore, a quiet voice is talking and I say, "pardon?" Soon, I hear a lot of chatter and muttering, and sweet music- Symphony 5, by Beethoven; there is a great assemblage of many creatures, the notes swirl far into the ocean. The flowers sway and I find my dream self dancing, and I am laughing and talking to each creature; even each beautiful flower has a voice, then I fall, fall- falling wrapped in nature. And in my soft bed I am talking in my sleep, I am creating words with syllables; saying, "I must write a Haiku or a Quatrain." Waking, I find myself talking in syl-la-bles ! ________________________ January 14, 2017 Poetry/Quatrain/In My Sleep Copyright Protected, ID 17-9584-42-0 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym.

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Date: 11/9/2017 1:39:00 PM
Oh so very familiar , I tend to do so much of this... ... I have to write what is on my mind :) Fantastic write, Broken Wings. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 11/9/2017 6:32:00 AM
Lovely, dream BW. When I was young all of my dreams were Nightmares, until I learned to control them, then they became strange and sometimes creepy but I miss them very much at times. I remember very few dreams now.
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Date: 11/8/2017 6:48:00 PM
Amazing what you can see when you close your eyes! I really enjoyed this.
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Date: 11/8/2017 2:26:00 PM
So creative and appealing, Constance! Janice
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Date: 11/8/2017 2:08:00 PM
You have wonderful imagination BW--a well written poem!
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