In My Mind

" A woodland path in the dappled sun, hushed and quiet."
                                                                        by a Rambling Poet

In my mind I can wander down the path
Feel the lovely peace of evening tide
Escape the walls that hold me fast
And with nature for a time abide

I always loved to walk at sundown
Feeling the passing of the day
How I long to hear the bird songs
and watch the squirrels at play

My body has betrayed me now
And can no longer take me there
But the path is vivid in my mind
And for that moment I have no care

For the" Woodland Path" contest
Barbara Gorelick    6/8/11

written for a friend who is bedridden
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
June 13, 2011 at 9:22 PM
LOve the nostalgia of this one, Barbara. It's beautiful! Congratulations on your win.
Kendrick Avatar
June 13, 2011 at 3:52 PM
Congrats on your win..Sara
Muzzey Avatar
June 13, 2011 at 12:37 PM
Congratulations Barbara, on your win with this lovely write~ Caryl
Brown Avatar
June 13, 2011 at 7:37 AM
Congratulations on your win in Constance's "A Woodland Path" contest Barbara. Love, Carol
Mantle Avatar
June 13, 2011 at 1:48 AM
Congrats on your win. A beautiful piece. Best wishes Em :)
Puddifoot Avatar
June 12, 2011 at 3:38 PM
congrats on your shared win with this serene poem, and thank you for commenting on my 'living stones' poem...
Phookan Avatar
June 12, 2011 at 2:30 PM
Congrats Barbara on your super win in this contest with this lovely write on woodland theme..love, gautami
Horne Avatar
June 12, 2011 at 9:42 AM
Many congrats on your wins, Barbara : )
Richards Avatar
June 12, 2011 at 8:21 AM
A touching, and rather sad poem, of what may be only a memory, but so beautiful it is! Congratulations, Barbara!
Mehta Avatar
June 12, 2011 at 8:20 AM
My congratulations on the second place win in the contest, Barbara
La France Avatar
June 12, 2011 at 7:43 AM
Congratulations, Barabara on a shared 2nd place in my contest with this beautiful poem~
Sweetheart Avatar
June 12, 2011 at 7:17 AM
Congrats BG on your beautiful win in Constance's contest with this equally beautiful write .. enjoy top billing with luv..
Long Avatar
June 12, 2011 at 7:16 AM
congrats on your win. cory
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June 11, 2011 at 6:23 PM
nicely written and a great place to visit that time of day allows you to escape and focus at the very same time
Foulk Avatar
June 9, 2011 at 11:19 AM
a beautiful and well worded piece of poetry.
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