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In My Heart a Rose

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My mind and body thrive on the gentle rose. My passion for you is a tornado, as a sage knows. I'm frail and filled with a verve I didn't realize I had. The rose inside my heart has left me so glad. We had a short tryst the first moment we met. Her aroma was a mix of warmth and otto's sweat. I begged my pounding heart to slow down. In scary delight, I lost how even lovers drown. You have no spikes but smell akin to perfume. Flower petals expel and flow when in bloom. A silken duvet cover in a gorgeous pink hue I adore being able to voice how I feel for you. Rose petals in motion sustain her beauty. The crimson velvet beneath her was snooty. Feel the crimson hue of our proud residual. Fabulous in her veil as we recite our ritual My heart beats with the beauty of a rose Providing an everlasting feeling of bestows A rose that is flawless, spotless, and adamant Kingly, self-assured, unflappable, and extravagant Rose, do you truly yearn to stay amazing? Your turn has arrived, or the wind is pacing What would we be if not for your petal? My heart and insights are vigorously special.
Written: March 25, 2023

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Date: 3/26/2023 7:44:00 AM
WOW Lasaad what a delightful poem to someone who is like a rose or her name is Rose, either way, your love for this Rose or for the rose is intensely conveyed and profoundly put across to the reader. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 3/26/2023 5:43:00 AM
A heartfelt ode to rose my friend. Delightful images throughout, Lasaad.
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