Michael J. Falotico Poet Rhyme

In My Hands

Standing by the barren sea...
out stretched hands make it free...
A city in his grasp held by a figure
higher and wiser then me...
The future not scribed in stone...
With these powerful hands we will
never be alone...A glassy surface
reflects our land.. Always safe and 
protected by God's hand...



contest entry...Carolyn"s

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Andrea Dietrich June 24, 2010 at 2:31 PM Congratulations on your win with this fine poem. LUv, Andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown June 24, 2010 at 6:08 AM Congratulations Michael on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's contest "The Power in Your Hands". Love, Carol

James Marshall Goff June 23, 2010 at 3:54 PM inspirational! Michael! congrats! jimbo

Iolanda Scripca June 23, 2010 at 1:11 PM Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Iolanda

James Fraser June 23, 2010 at 12:34 PM Many congratulations Michael on your win in Carolyn's fine contest >> James

Joyce Johnson June 23, 2010 at 11:49 AM llWhat a beautiful interpretation of the picture. Congratulations on a fine poem and win. Love, Joyce

Barbara Gorelick June 23, 2010 at 11:44 AM beautiful litte gem...congrats on your success in the contest. BG

John Freeman June 23, 2010 at 10:20 AM The power is His hands, of this barron lands, His Glory He will not give to another. But share in His Glory we can, if we will. Congratulations, Michael, on your poem's success in this beautiful spiritual contest. Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire June 23, 2010 at 8:56 AM Yes, we are protected in God's hands, Michael. Very nice! Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Diane Christian June 20, 2010 at 12:22 PM a great poem and we are in safe hands when we let him pick us up, he wont ever leave us. God bless from diane

Sarah Hales June 19, 2010 at 3:40 PM Oh i like this esp the... With these powerful hands we will never be alone.. GREAT GREAT LOVE IT Sarah x