In My Eyes - Two Form Style
Undressing you with my fiery gaze
Coloring my lips red in your praise
This cold spring
breezy
wind
parting
clouds
Your patience against my impatience
Laying your lips soft on my fragrance
A silent dawn
breaks
into
rhythmic
melodies
Landing compliments on paths taken
Drizzles in the wind, leaves are shaken
Sunlight filtering through
dense
estuary
aqueous
Jewel illumination
Touching you with my soft silky voice
Moistening my lips to enhance yours
(Couplet + Innovative Haiku Style consecutively)
The couplets are written in 9 syllables each, with the intention of denoting a cloud nine feeling. Starting with rhymed couplets and ending with unrhymed couplets.
Innovative Haiku poems are haiku-like with one or more of the traditional haiku elements missing in its style. (Based on the definition from The Haiku Foundation)
Copyright © Angeline Haikutwinkle | Year Posted 2016
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